For Children
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Have You Seen My Mummy"Little stories for children in rhyme
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Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
they are a perfect match
you capture my attention from the first line to the end
mostly the last line when he realize he will soon be a butterfly... my depart daughter loved butterfly's.
Thank you for making me smile thinking of her.
Peace God be with you
Cookie
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
they are a perfect match
you capture my attention from the first line to the end
mostly the last line when he realize he will soon be a butterfly... my depart daughter loved butterfly's.
Thank you for making me smile thinking of her.
Peace God be with you
Cookie
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much, Miss Cookie! :)
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Your very welcome,
Cookie
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
Sweet poem! I enjoyed reading about Casper's adventure to find his mum, the butterfly, very creative. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Sweet poem! I enjoyed reading about Casper's adventure to find his mum, the butterfly, very creative. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you! And thanks for the good luck wishes! :) xx
Comment from Boogienights
This is delightful. It really could be a children's book it's so good. I'm in the contest also, but I can't compete with poems of this caliber. Thanks for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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This is delightful. It really could be a children's book it's so good. I'm in the contest also, but I can't compete with poems of this caliber. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much, for this lovely review, Boogienights. Sending you good luck wishes also. :)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
Well, what a delightful children's rhyming poem.
I am sending you a slew of virtual six stars!
I loved the entire presentation, and I am certain that many young AND older readers will as well!
So very pleased that you inserted pictures in your presentation as well; I so appreciate that element on Advanced editior = gives your presentation polish!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Hello Mystery Writer!
Well, what a delightful children's rhyming poem.
I am sending you a slew of virtual six stars!
I loved the entire presentation, and I am certain that many young AND older readers will as well!
So very pleased that you inserted pictures in your presentation as well; I so appreciate that element on Advanced editior = gives your presentation polish!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Advanced editor is amazing, I use it all the time now. Thank you, Diane, for the lovely review, I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading it. :) xx
Comment from zanya
What a delightful children's rhyming poem for the contest filled with adventure and fun and science and visual illustration to lift the spirit - it should make its way to the winner's enclosure
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What a delightful children's rhyming poem for the contest filled with adventure and fun and science and visual illustration to lift the spirit - it should make its way to the winner's enclosure
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for those lovely stars, Zanya, and the lovely review! :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry< Mystery Author. Your presentation is superb. I love all the critters pictured in turn. Your rhymes and flow a super, too. The repeated lines work well. I believe kids will like hearing those lines. They will like the interactions of the caterpillar with the other critters he meets. The ending will surprise them, but it is a good lesson too that will grab their attention. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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This is a great contest entry< Mystery Author. Your presentation is superb. I love all the critters pictured in turn. Your rhymes and flow a super, too. The repeated lines work well. I believe kids will like hearing those lines. They will like the interactions of the caterpillar with the other critters he meets. The ending will surprise them, but it is a good lesson too that will grab their attention. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much, Jan! xx
Comment from nomi338
Bravo. You have done well in creating a children's story that any child would, I believe, be entertained by. The big challenge with children is that they are easily bored. So, the story should be simple with words that repeat but with changing situations to keep interest alive and move the tale along. The ending should be joyful to make the listener happy with the outcome. Excellent.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Bravo. You have done well in creating a children's story that any child would, I believe, be entertained by. The big challenge with children is that they are easily bored. So, the story should be simple with words that repeat but with changing situations to keep interest alive and move the tale along. The ending should be joyful to make the listener happy with the outcome. Excellent.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you so very much, Nomi, for the six stars! Your review and remarks are wonderful. I'm delighted you enjoyed my poem. :)
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You are welcome. Please tell me that his is or will be a book very soon.
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Yes, it will! I'm going to write more and then publish them. I have a few written already, that I've posted over the years on here. Now that people are asking if I'll publish this one, I'm going to dust the others off and put them together and then add a few more. Thanks for being so kind and encouraging! xx
Comment from DonandVicki
Good poetry can be like music, especially to a child. Your poem will make children smile and dance and if put into a book, this will be their favorite book of all. Don
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Good poetry can be like music, especially to a child. Your poem will make children smile and dance and if put into a book, this will be their favorite book of all. Don
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you for those shiny stars, and wonderful review, Don. I'm planning on writing many children's poem and publishing them. Thank you for your encouraging comments! :))
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
Nice piece of Children Poetry having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme wording, captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme which culminates in the last stanza.
Pictures enhance beauty of the poem.
Interesting, Indeed!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Hello Friend,
Nice piece of Children Poetry having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme wording, captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme which culminates in the last stanza.
Pictures enhance beauty of the poem.
Interesting, Indeed!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you! And thanks so much for the best of luck wishes. :)
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Sandra xx, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Children's poem
Have You Seen My Mummy
Hello, Anonymous,
Wonderful entry for the Children's Rhyming Poem writing prompt contest. I read it to my grandson, Atticus. He liked it a lot, told me to give you a six and wants to hear it again. The only suggestion we have is to change ladybird to ladybug. I read other entries for this contest and yours is the best. Good luck!!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Children's poem
Have You Seen My Mummy
Hello, Anonymous,
Wonderful entry for the Children's Rhyming Poem writing prompt contest. I read it to my grandson, Atticus. He liked it a lot, told me to give you a six and wants to hear it again. The only suggestion we have is to change ladybird to ladybug. I read other entries for this contest and yours is the best. Good luck!!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Aww, bless his heart! That he liked it a lot is so encouraging. I want to put a book together of children's rhyming poems, so his comments are so appreciated. Thank you for listening to him and giving me a six stars! Lol. You can give him a hug from me. Thank you Gypsy Blue Rose, you've put a big smile on my face. :)
