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Comment from Ulla
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Hi Sandra, this is a very well written chapter. Tania is lucky that she will physically will make a full recover. But Grant is right. How will she mentally cope with it. That healing will take a very long time. I can understand that she wants to know where Colin is. I'm waiting for the answer. This is a great story. A big hug, Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
    Thank you so much for the lovely sixth star, Ulla, and the lovely review. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying my story. Now to the next bit. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxxx
Comment from BethShelby
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I'm still loving your story and I'm glad she is going to hear. Colin is in the same hospital. I hape he want find out and try to get too her. It seems Grant is falling in love with her but he has his own emotional problems to deal with. I looking forward to your next chapter.
Beth

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
    Thank you so much for another lovely review, Beth. Grant has a lot to sort out, but he's made a start by admitting it to himself. Have a lovely week my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This Chapter of the Fiction speaks in continuation about betrayal through an appropriate and narrative taletelling, progresses thru' a good plot development and dialogues realistic, ends with a curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 21-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
    Thank you so much for your continued support of my story, Alcreator, I really appreciate it. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Well, now I guess it's time to get to the mushy part and find out where the story goes from here. I have my ideas, but with you, there's always a chance you might throw in an unexpected twist. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
    Mushy part!!! Lol. Thank you for those colourful stars, Ric and the lovely review. There might be a few more twists but what they might be, I haven't the foggiest, they haven't told me yet. :)) Thanks, my friend, for another review that has put a smile on my face. Sending you another virtual hug. Love, Sandra. xxxx
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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An excellent chapter, Sandra. Grant's rant at his (ex) mother, and his realization that he cares more than a little for Tania, are satisfying factors.
Justice is prevalent and makes for good feelings all around. Knowing that Tania is not permanently damaged is comforting as well.

Ralf

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 Comment Written 21-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
    Thank you, Ralf. Yes, things are going to change. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. Have a lovely week, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx