Be An Eagle!
Be An Eagle and Succeed!47 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Be An Eagle and Succeed!
Be An Eagle!
RPSaxena your two line poem for the contest
as a great essence poem with internal and ending rhyme.
Gert
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Be An Eagle and Succeed!
Be An Eagle!
RPSaxena your two line poem for the contest
as a great essence poem with internal and ending rhyme.
Gert
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Hello Gert,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by veiled Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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RPSaxena
You are Most Welcome
Gert
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RPSaxena you are most welcome.
Gert
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Great 2 line poem you have here. You have all the requirements of syllable count and internal/end rhymes.
You e got all your rhymes with an "ite" sound. I bet that was hard!
Good luck in the contest!
Katiemae
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Great 2 line poem you have here. You have all the requirements of syllable count and internal/end rhymes.
You e got all your rhymes with an "ite" sound. I bet that was hard!
Good luck in the contest!
Katiemae
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Hello Katiemae,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Gloria ....
Eagles truly are magnificent birds. They are awe inspiring and show us their strength and determination.
A fine entry into this contest with internal and external rhymes, and I wish you great luck with the committee. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Eagles truly are magnificent birds. They are awe inspiring and show us their strength and determination.
A fine entry into this contest with internal and external rhymes, and I wish you great luck with the committee. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Hello Gloria,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from LisaMay
I like your poem a lot and appreciate how well you have used rhyme. A hesitation I have is that using the word 'makes' suggests that we are forced to do something in response to the eagle, rather than it being a symbol for us to aspire to be like it. Perhaps the last line could read:
And helps us fight our plight!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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I like your poem a lot and appreciate how well you have used rhyme. A hesitation I have is that using the word 'makes' suggests that we are forced to do something in response to the eagle, rather than it being a symbol for us to aspire to be like it. Perhaps the last line could read:
And helps us fight our plight!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Hello LisaMay,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by a suggestion regarding 'makes'.
'Makes' or 'make' implies not only 'coercive force' but 'spontaneous force' also. In other words, not only 'coercion' but 'spontaneity' as well. I think so.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. You have good rhyming patterns. Excellent work! No mistakes. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. You have good rhyming patterns. Excellent work! No mistakes. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Hello Raul1,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by veiled Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello RP!
The eagle is such a magnificent bird! We have two eagles that nest near our home; absolutely thrilling to witness them in flight.
I am wondering if "help" as opposed to "make" would establish the fact that the eagle is a symbol of inspiration and strength. Just a thought.
Thank you for sharing!
Best wishes!
diane
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Hello RP!
The eagle is such a magnificent bird! We have two eagles that nest near our home; absolutely thrilling to witness them in flight.
I am wondering if "help" as opposed to "make" would establish the fact that the eagle is a symbol of inspiration and strength. Just a thought.
Thank you for sharing!
Best wishes!
diane
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Hello Mrs. KT,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by veiled Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from mermaids
Excellent essence poem which is not easy to create. I like the image of the eagle and the symbol of the eagle to strive to go beyond our plight. Excellent use of words with a smooth rhyming flow.
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Excellent essence poem which is not easy to create. I like the image of the eagle and the symbol of the eagle to strive to go beyond our plight. Excellent use of words with a smooth rhyming flow.
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Hello Mermaids,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by veiled Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
