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Comment from rspoet
This could be an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
but the third line, 'I know you there," only has four syllables.
Just add a syllable.
Otherwise, it has some nice imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
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This could be an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
but the third line, 'I know you there," only has four syllables.
Just add a syllable.
Otherwise, it has some nice imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
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Damn. You are right. Thanks!
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Damn. You are right. Thanks!
