Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Paul, this truly is a poem for thought
my sweet friend...I don't foresee it happening...
but you never know...He is a God of miracles...

and He may take your advice...so keep checking
your email...He may want to Thank You...

I love your poem...made me smile...and I love
this picture...very well thought of...and very well written...Good Luck in the contest...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thanks, Linda. I hope it's a thank you email instead of a reprimand.

reply by l.raven on 19-Apr-2023

I'm sure it will be a Thank You...
He knows your heart is in the right place...
and your so very welcome...love xxoo

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Sounds logical. So I guess when you do not hear from him and you think you might be ghosted, consider it a hard no. It always hurts to be denied, but clearly some requests deserve hard nos. Prayers that hurt a rival, prayers that provide an unfair boost, etc.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thanks for the review, Nolan. I probably should stop praying to win all these contests.

reply by nomi338 on 19-Apr-2023

I already have.

Comment from Brandon Clark

Excellent

Very unique and entertaining. Data compiling is a very sought after career, he would do well to advertise on Indeed for an assistant...although that could mean imminent doom for the applicant...lol, sorry couldn't help myself.

Terrific job on this and I wish you nothing but greatest luck in the contest!
Brandon

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 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thanks, Brandon. I hope God has a sense of humor.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is a cute concept and I liked your rhymes. There was one typo, just to help you (divvices). The image supports your writing, well. Good writing! :))

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 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thanks, Alexandra. You've got to remember that I'm from Maine. "divvies" is a word where I live. We have a special dictionary for our area of the world.