Grief
My heartache has not ended43 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I'm sorry to hear you lost your mom when she was so young. I can't imagine that feeling, although my mom almost died at 56 and when she had a major heart attack we all thought she wouldn't survive. I had some time of fear thinking She'ded be gone and that was bad enough. So I can only imagine your emptiness. I'm sorry. My mom died at 85 and I no longer have her. I was youngest of five, so she was 35 years older than me and still we were very close. Your genuine emotional words are good and your presentation is very good. Keep writing about her. Many readers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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I'm sorry to hear you lost your mom when she was so young. I can't imagine that feeling, although my mom almost died at 56 and when she had a major heart attack we all thought she wouldn't survive. I had some time of fear thinking She'ded be gone and that was bad enough. So I can only imagine your emptiness. I'm sorry. My mom died at 85 and I no longer have her. I was youngest of five, so she was 35 years older than me and still we were very close. Your genuine emotional words are good and your presentation is very good. Keep writing about her. Many readers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 18-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Dear Alexandra,
Thank you for sharing your story. I'm glad to hear that your mom survived to live a long life. It's still never long enough though is it?
Thank you for you kind review.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I cannot answer the question posed, but I can do a little math and if right you are 64, What has that to do with all the tea in China? I need to write 150 characters. And by the way I am sorry for your loss.
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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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I cannot answer the question posed, but I can do a little math and if right you are 64, What has that to do with all the tea in China? I need to write 150 characters. And by the way I am sorry for your loss.
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your kind words and five star review.
Comment from JSD
A sweet and heart-warming tribute to your mother. Beautifully composed with unforced and natural rhyme. I especially like the half rhyme in the first two lines. Good luck in the contest. x
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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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A sweet and heart-warming tribute to your mother. Beautifully composed with unforced and natural rhyme. I especially like the half rhyme in the first two lines. Good luck in the contest. x
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Thank your for your kindness and your five star review!
