Moments linger
A poem47 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
Hello Jesse,
It's good to see you posting poetry again, though the topic is sad
in the nicely rhymed poem. Time is your friend as pain transforms
into warm memories that are cherished forever.
I like the idea of a lingering moment that crystalizes from within.
Perfect choice of art work.
Best wishes to you, my friend.
Robert
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Hello Jesse,
It's good to see you posting poetry again, though the topic is sad
in the nicely rhymed poem. Time is your friend as pain transforms
into warm memories that are cherished forever.
I like the idea of a lingering moment that crystalizes from within.
Perfect choice of art work.
Best wishes to you, my friend.
Robert
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Hello Robert.
First of all, thank you for the six stars. I am honored to receive them from such a refined poet.
I hope you are right and time transforms into warm memories that will last forever.
I am glad you like the artwork. David and I both loved the sea and dolphins swimming in it seemed to hit the spot.
Best wishes to you as well, my friend.
Jesse
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
"Creating a cherished memory
Tenderly placed on my lover's skin" .... I love it.
It's sad to part but sometimes is okay. It sounds like you parted on good terms.
I'm very emotional and don't deal with separation well.
You expressed yourself in a very poetic and romantic way. Well done, Jesse
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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"Creating a cherished memory
Tenderly placed on my lover's skin" .... I love it.
It's sad to part but sometimes is okay. It sounds like you parted on good terms.
I'm very emotional and don't deal with separation well.
You expressed yourself in a very poetic and romantic way. Well done, Jesse
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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We parted on good terms yet the grief grips me so much it hurts to breathe.
I'm emotional as well.
Thank you for your kind words.
Coming from you I consider this a virtual six with such high praise for poetry.
Thanks, Maraval.
Jesse
Comment from Monica Chaddick
Wow! This was so sad. It reminded me of when my husband passed away. I'm sorry that you have had to experience a loss as deep as this one obviously was. You did a great job voicing the feelings.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Wow! This was so sad. It reminded me of when my husband passed away. I'm sorry that you have had to experience a loss as deep as this one obviously was. You did a great job voicing the feelings.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Yes, I am sad and grieving my loss of him yet I am happy that my feelings came across well. Thank you for the six stars.
Your review touched me deeply.
Thanks, Monica.
Jesse
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Dear Jesse,
I will update to six stars, tomorrow. I'm sorry to hear this, my Friend. I do know, from my own life, at least, that with every single change, something better was sent to me. Now, every day, I can share all of life's changes with Chris. I am sure your life is preparing you for something better.
Keep strong and know that I care.
Thak you for bravely sharing this that is written so well. :) Alex
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Dear Jesse,
I will update to six stars, tomorrow. I'm sorry to hear this, my Friend. I do know, from my own life, at least, that with every single change, something better was sent to me. Now, every day, I can share all of life's changes with Chris. I am sure your life is preparing you for something better.
Keep strong and know that I care.
Thak you for bravely sharing this that is written so well. :) Alex
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Hello Alex.
Thanks for the uplifting and encouraging review. I know in my heart there will be someone in the future who is better suited for me. I appreciate your kind words.
Jesse
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I know better days are before you.
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Thanks, my friend.
Comment from locust
What a beautiful and heartbreaking poem. The first stanza is excellent and nicely set the tone for the rest of it. Congratulations on your 200th post! What an achievement!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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What a beautiful and heartbreaking poem. The first stanza is excellent and nicely set the tone for the rest of it. Congratulations on your 200th post! What an achievement!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you for pointing out the stanza that sets the tone for the rest of my poem.
I appreciate your kind congrats for my 200th post. It makes me happy to know I've achieved so much.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Jesse
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Moments Linger, presented with three ABCB-rhymed quatrains, captures the moments that have been important, especially in a time for healing. Life moves on.
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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This poem, Moments Linger, presented with three ABCB-rhymed quatrains, captures the moments that have been important, especially in a time for healing. Life moves on.
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Bill, for this encouraging review.
It is a time for healing and moving on.
Enjoy the weekend.
Jesse
Comment from royowen
When we change direction in life we can lose a friend, so many when was young, not any more, friend's lives have evened out. Thank you for sharing your inner and outer life with us Jesse, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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When we change direction in life we can lose a friend, so many when was young, not any more, friend's lives have evened out. Thank you for sharing your inner and outer life with us Jesse, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thanks for being the first review.
I can always count on you, Roy.
I appreciate your kind support.
Thanks for your blessings,
Jesse