Men from Mars~Women from Venus
Just a Silly Fictional about not wanting to be opposite sex50 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
You did a fabulous job with the club prompt. When I read the prompt, I couldn't think of a thing to say. Now I see you said it all. I especially liked "and hubby's stronger than I am so he opens my jars." My hands won't even open a bottle of water.
Your first verse is hilarious. Thanks for the evening smile.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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You did a fabulous job with the club prompt. When I read the prompt, I couldn't think of a thing to say. Now I see you said it all. I especially liked "and hubby's stronger than I am so he opens my jars." My hands won't even open a bottle of water.
Your first verse is hilarious. Thanks for the evening smile.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Hi Lorraine, you are always so sweet. Thank you so very much for all your kind comments. This was a little out of my norm and I am hope I wasn't out of line with the P line.
Thanks again for the wonderful review, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from pome lover
well, you and old swingin' Bing. buh buh buh boo :) My Mom used to love listening to him.
Cute, with some very original rhymes, Miss Deb.
I would definitely not want to be a man. No way jose! and I can't imagine you being one, either.
I have to say, this is a very different poem. The only thing I think I have in common with men is I do like country music! Some men.
Take care, Sweewtie,
K
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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well, you and old swingin' Bing. buh buh buh boo :) My Mom used to love listening to him.
Cute, with some very original rhymes, Miss Deb.
I would definitely not want to be a man. No way jose! and I can't imagine you being one, either.
I have to say, this is a very different poem. The only thing I think I have in common with men is I do like country music! Some men.
Take care, Sweewtie,
K
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Hi Kay, you are always so sweet. Thank you so very much for all your kind comments. This was a little out of my norm and I am hope I wasn't out of line with the P line.
Thanks again for the wonderful review, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from lyenochka
I agree that it's best to be ourselves just as the Lord made us. I had to smile about you needing your husband to open the jars. Me, too! But there are very capable and strong women who don't need help. They are uniquely gifted, too!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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I agree that it's best to be ourselves just as the Lord made us. I had to smile about you needing your husband to open the jars. Me, too! But there are very capable and strong women who don't need help. They are uniquely gifted, too!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Helen, I have so regretted doing this prompt as I have been changing it every couple minutes. After I wrote about being the opposite sex I knew it was not for me. I don't know about using the word penis, but it is just one of the body parts. And yet I didn't know if it is more appropriate to spell it out or what. I keep changing it because that voice in me was telling me to disable it, but I can't do that because it cost too much to promote.
Thanks so much for your review. I appreciate any advice right now, cause I just don't feel it. Thanks a lot, sweetie. Love, Debi
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Don't worry about it. It's not your usual writing and you focused on not wanting to be anything else. That's fine.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
It's even better. It's a romantic comedy. It's a good thing men and women are different. We compliment each other and as you say...they open our jars. Lol. Love the poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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It's even better. It's a romantic comedy. It's a good thing men and women are different. We compliment each other and as you say...they open our jars. Lol. Love the poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Hi Marilyn, you are always so sweet. Thank you so very much for all your kind comments. This was a little out of my norm and I am hope I wasn't out of line with the P line.
Thanks again for the wonderful review, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Teri7
Debi, This is a very cute poem you have penned for the writing prompt.
Tom and I feel the same way as you and your husband. I think we both are happy being married to our spouses, because of who they are, and I am because of who Tom helps me to be each day. He loves the Lord and so do I! Thank you for this great entry for this contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Debi, This is a very cute poem you have penned for the writing prompt.
Tom and I feel the same way as you and your husband. I think we both are happy being married to our spouses, because of who they are, and I am because of who Tom helps me to be each day. He loves the Lord and so do I! Thank you for this great entry for this contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Hi Teri, you are always so sweet. Thank you so very much for all your kind comments. This was a little out of my norm and I am hope I wasn't out of line with the P line.
Thanks again for the wonderful review, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
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I think you did a really cute job with this! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well done, Debi, you succeeded! This is a truly comical and imaginative verse that makes me smile. I like your coyness with p***s (would the full word have involved a cautionary gateway?:)) I don't think there's any chance of you two love birds being we(a)ned. And He('d) say it's boring...
Great inventive rhyming throughout; particularly impressive monorhymes. A lovely read...and all topped off with Bing! Thanks for sharing, Debi. Love Debbie
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Well done, Debi, you succeeded! This is a truly comical and imaginative verse that makes me smile. I like your coyness with p***s (would the full word have involved a cautionary gateway?:)) I don't think there's any chance of you two love birds being we(a)ned. And He('d) say it's boring...
Great inventive rhyming throughout; particularly impressive monorhymes. A lovely read...and all topped off with Bing! Thanks for sharing, Debi. Love Debbie
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Hi Debbie, this is the stupidest thing I have ever written and I'm changing it every couple minutes so fast that it is no wonder I am missing some stuff. I can't believe I got two sixes on it already. I thought about disabling but it cost me so much.
Were you saying I should spell out the word, penis? It's not that I am afraid to say it, but I don't know what is appropriate? Thanks, sweetheart!!
Love, Debi
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No, best leave it in case (we can be a bit sensitive here:)) Just we(a)n and he('d) xos
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Thanks Deb. Got the one and the other has been changed 100 times. I don't feel comfortable at all with this prompt and not sure why I even did it. It's just not me.
Thanks again,
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
that's an absolute ideal picture of the best possible way to be happy and your général poetry is portraying the perfection of Love, i really liked that,
thanks a million for such a great inspiration. Sarah
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that's an absolute ideal picture of the best possible way to be happy and your général poetry is portraying the perfection of Love, i really liked that,
thanks a million for such a great inspiration. Sarah
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Hi Sara, you are so sweet. Thank you so very much for all your kind comments. This was a little out of my norm, so I appreciate your generous six stars too.
Thanks again for the wonderful review, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
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You’re welcome Debi 🩵
Comment from Ronny Guy
I recognize that song. It's from the TV show "Out Of This World," a sitcom that aired when you and I were in jr. high school. And I love how you brought back the joke of men being from Mars and Women being from Venus and turned it into a poem. ... and added a music video from the 1950's. I wouldn't have thought to do this myself.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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I recognize that song. It's from the TV show "Out Of This World," a sitcom that aired when you and I were in jr. high school. And I love how you brought back the joke of men being from Mars and Women being from Venus and turned it into a poem. ... and added a music video from the 1950's. I wouldn't have thought to do this myself.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Hi Ronny, you are so sweet. I don't remember that show, "Out of This World." I just remember the song because my dad had a record of it. I was born in 1954. But I looked it up and it says it was a British show. Maybe that is why I never heard of it.
Thank you so very much for all your kind comments and your generous six stars.
Thanks again for the wonderful review, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
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You're more than welcome
Comment from GWHARGIS
I embrace the differences between men and women. Most are physical and some emotional. But when it comes to intelligence, it's a toss up. I love your jar analogy. So spot on. Great poem. Gretchen
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I embrace the differences between men and women. Most are physical and some emotional. But when it comes to intelligence, it's a toss up. I love your jar analogy. So spot on. Great poem. Gretchen
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Hi Gretchen, you are always so sweet. Thank you so very much for all your kind comments. This was a little out of my norm and I am hope I wasn't out of line with the P line.
Thanks again for the wonderful review, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. You have me pondering what would my life look like if I were a man. Would I think like a man, have a body like a man? Hmm, I don't think I would like that. I totally enjoy being the princess of the house. LOL
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. You have me pondering what would my life look like if I were a man. Would I think like a man, have a body like a man? Hmm, I don't think I would like that. I totally enjoy being the princess of the house. LOL
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Hi Barb, you are always so sweet. Thank you so very much for all your kind comments. This was a really out of my norm and I am hope I wasn't out of line with the P line.
Thanks again for the wonderful review, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
