Karma Kite
Letting go95 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Amada
Wonderfully done nanni...Using the freedom of the high flying kite to show where our spirits can fly if we will only let loose of some of our burdens. Great job!
Carol
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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Amada
Wonderfully done nanni...Using the freedom of the high flying kite to show where our spirits can fly if we will only let loose of some of our burdens. Great job!
Carol
Comment Written 11-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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Thank you Carol for the great and insightful review.
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Thank you Carol for the great review to this naani.
Comment from jason456
What a strong message in so few words. I relate this to letting go of our grown children. Sometimes we do need to lighten the load from our worn out shoulders. Great job!
Patti :)
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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What a strong message in so few words. I relate this to letting go of our grown children. Sometimes we do need to lighten the load from our worn out shoulders. Great job!
Patti :)
Comment Written 11-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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thank yo Patti:)
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It was my pleasure.
Patti :)
Comment from redglasses
So simple, uncomplicated and yet so difficult, I'm sure, to create that vision and feeling. It created a freeing feeling in me when I read it.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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So simple, uncomplicated and yet so difficult, I'm sure, to create that vision and feeling. It created a freeing feeling in me when I read it.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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Thank you, redglasses, for the very nice compliments to this kite poem.
Comment from Kathy58
This is just beautifully depicted poetry right here. Ilove everything about this one.The Artwork wonderfully attributes your words, kathy58
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This is just beautifully depicted poetry right here. Ilove everything about this one.The Artwork wonderfully attributes your words, kathy58
Comment Written 11-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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Thank you for the most gracious review.
Comment from lola29
Amada, your naani is fabulous. I'm very impressed with your message so cleverly designed of few words. It is true that when we open our hands and let go, our burdens become lighter. Bravo!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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Amada, your naani is fabulous. I'm very impressed with your message so cleverly designed of few words. It is true that when we open our hands and let go, our burdens become lighter. Bravo!
Comment Written 11-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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Thank you lola29 for the very gracious review to this kite.
Comment from Lisha L
This is a well written poem and I like the way the shape of the writing almost takes the shape of a rising kite. The imagery goes well with the photo you are using. Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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This is a well written poem and I like the way the shape of the writing almost takes the shape of a rising kite. The imagery goes well with the photo you are using. Well done.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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Thank you Lisha L for the great review to this kite.
Comment from Judian James
This is so good Amada. I wrote one recently about a kite as well and I can't for the life of me remember the name of the piece but this one spoke to me and I completely "get it"!! excellent
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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This is so good Amada. I wrote one recently about a kite as well and I can't for the life of me remember the name of the piece but this one spoke to me and I completely "get it"!! excellent
Comment Written 11-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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Yes, kiting is such an exhilarating feeling.
Comment from fayesh
You chose a interesting metaphor to express the release of one's cares into the wind and allow nature to take over. I think the only problem I had with the poem is that a kite does not weigh that much and there is that string that still controls it.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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You chose a interesting metaphor to express the release of one's cares into the wind and allow nature to take over. I think the only problem I had with the poem is that a kite does not weigh that much and there is that string that still controls it.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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Thank you fayesh for taking the time to read and comment in this poem.
Comment from leesm
I'm not very knowledgeable about these naani poems, but yours sure reads well and is full of meaning in so few words. I really like the concept of a "karma kite".
Very nicely written. Good luck in your contest.
Warm regards,
-Lee
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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I'm not very knowledgeable about these naani poems, but yours sure reads well and is full of meaning in so few words. I really like the concept of a "karma kite".
Very nicely written. Good luck in your contest.
Warm regards,
-Lee
Comment Written 11-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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Thank you Lee for reading and commenting in this poem.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Amada ...
You certainly have a colourful picture at the top of this short work and your words tell quite a story.
I enjoyed reading what you have written and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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Hullo Amada ...
You certainly have a colourful picture at the top of this short work and your words tell quite a story.
I enjoyed reading what you have written and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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Thank you for the caring review, blessed great grandmother. The Lord is with you.
