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Just believe!

Somethings never die, if only you will ....

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Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Begin Again no one should compain about your wonderful
Fantasy story
You made me feel like a child in a make believe world
I don't see one thing to be changed
I wish you the best of luck.
Oh yes I love the final touch to your story with Grandpa and and is grandson singing Puff the Magic Dragon,

Big smile
Gert

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2009


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
    Gert

    My first attempt and I am pleased with the results. Glad you enjoyed it. Smiles, Carol
reply by Gert sherwood on 19-Nov-2009
    You are so welcome Carol
    Gert
Comment from Sasha
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I wish I had a 6. This is an absolutely delightful, well written, and deeply moving story. A marvelous entry for the contest and as always, I sincerely wish you all the best.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2009


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
    Sash

    Your words thrill me much more than the six. I have never written a fantasy before...When I entered I though it was a flash fiction..I missed the fantasy part. Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much.

    smiles, Carol
reply by Sasha on 19-Nov-2009
    I missed the "fantasy" part too....
Comment from adewpearl
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Nobel kings and princes - Noble
This has long been one of my all-time favorite songs - it never occurred to me that Puff the Dragon might appear in caterpillar form, but what the heck, why not? LOL This is a delightful flight of fancy. I will leave comments on proper flash fiction to the flash fiction experts, but as a lay reader, I enjoyed this immensely, dear friend :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2009


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
    Brooke

    Thank you so much. I didn't realize it was fantasy fiction until I had already entered suneagle's contest... Needless to say, I gave it a shot for the first time. As for the flash fiction...I am sure someone will correct me...Thanks for enjoying the simple flight of fantasy for just a moment.

    Smiles to you, my friend. Carol
Comment from Patrick G Cox
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Hi BA, Lovely story that certainly brought back happy memories of sitting around campfires and in other odd places. PP&M were among my favourite musicians then. Nicely written and no spag I could see.
Patrick

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2009


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
    Patrick

    I was worried about this one. Didn't realize it was a fantasy flash fiction until after I entered. Never wrote one before. Glad it brought back nice memories and that you enjoyed it. Thanks...

    Smiles, Carol
Comment from kingskid
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Wish I had a six to give you for this delightful piece of fantasy. Needless to say Puff the Magic dragon was one of my favourite songs I used to sing to my three girls.
You truly did a delightful job.
Thanks for bringing back memories to another "oldie".
Well done.
kingskid

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2009


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
    kingskid

    Your words are worth more to me that a six...thank you. This was my first attempt at fantasy. When I entered the contest, I thought it was just flash fiction...At second look, I realized I need to write a fantasy...

    I am so pleased that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much.

    Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
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What a cute story!. I always loved that song, "Puff the Magic Dragon." It would take a child's imagination to turn a catapiller into a dragon but anything is possible if you believe.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2009


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
    Beth

    I have never written fantasy and when I joined the contest I thought it was just flash fiction...Duh! I had to think fantasy in a hurry. Glad you enjoyed.

    Carol
Comment from RADIO
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What a wonderful story to highlight
the fact that the gift of imagination
never dies. Loved the Grandpa ending.
I loved telling stories of the purple
horse that can fly to my Granddaughter.
"Puff the magic dragon," never dies.
Well done story.
Radio

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2009


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
    Radio

    It was my very first attempt at a fantasy so I was worried. Glad you enjoye it. smiles, Carol
Comment from misscookie
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What am I going to do with you!!! this is a cute story it will make a good children book what do you think?
I loved everything about the story
It's a good read.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2009


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
    Cookie

    Thanks so much. This was my first attempt at writing a fantasy story. I am glad you enjoyed it. Carol
Comment from jadapenn
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Hello, it's jada here. I think you've forgotten all about me! Anyway, I read you story. It's very sweet and developed the caterpillar and Jack well. The reader felt the magic surrounding these two.
Best wishes for the contest. luv jada

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 Comment Written 19-Nov-2009


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
    Jada

    Never...left you a message and read all the chapters. I caught up this a.m. Lots of things going on right now..Got up a 4 to write this story. Never written a fantasy before..I am glad you enjoyed it. Sweet and simple ..certainly nothing like your ghosts of the past,

    Thanks for the review,

    Carol
reply by jadapenn on 19-Nov-2009
    Hey girlfriend, thought you'd left the planet for a while. Wish I could. The ghosts are getting me down. But I'm headed to 40 000 so just have to hang in there. I loved Jack and Puff. You have the most wonderful ideas in your head. Hope you're okay now. luv jada
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
    I'll be better after his surgery this morning...We are just getting ready to leave for the hospital...Last time we ended up rushing to Chicago for emergency surgery...I pray that doesn't happen again...but they say there is a good chance it could...Lots of good thoughts please...Carol
reply by jadapenn on 19-Nov-2009
    Just believe, sweetie. I'll be thinking of you. luv lotsa luv - jada
Comment from dmjones
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I loved the song Puff the magic dragon but I haven't heard it in years. A good piece of flash fiction and fantasy.

One thing to check:

kings and prices (princes)

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 Comment Written 19-Nov-2009


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
    Donna

    Thanks for catching that. I wrote it so fast this morning. Wanted to post before going to the hospital. My Michael is having surgery. Appreciate the review, I have never written fantasy so this was a stretch for me. Thanks again.
reply by dmjones on 19-Nov-2009
    I'll keep Michael in mind and pray everything goes ok.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
    Thank you....I appreciate it. It's only cataracts but last time his left one exploded. I had two hours to drive him to Chicago for emergency surgery or he'd go blind...They are more prepared this time..and a different surgeon...Though the possibility is still there. I'll just do a lot of praying...Thanks again.
reply by dmjones on 19-Nov-2009
    I have a friend that is now blind in one eye due to the same problem. Scary situation.