Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hi. Wow, this book is shaping up to be a wonderful expose of human life and the soul of the genus man.
Love, or the loss of it or the keeping of it, the sea is a great image for it.
padumachitta

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2014

Comment from dennis0530

Excellent

As in the superscript of the title, the theme of this writing is about a lost love.

Musing on the image of the lost love on a calm pool of water, the writer asks what role the loved one fits in.

The character is of two minds. In doubt whether in revealing his feelings would it create passion or bring empty promises.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2014

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

A well written piece, addressing the questions a man finds himself
asking when love has bitten. The hopes and doubts he entertains.
The viability of permanence in the face of shifting winds.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2014

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi GW,

You sure are good at writing poetry. This is another really nice one that kept my interest. The photo of your home land is very nice too and goes well with your poem.

Kat

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2014

Comment from Tegan1311

Excellent

A very well written poem. Your words flow well you message clear and quite thought provoking. It's a sad poem but one I'm sure many can understand even if they can't relate to it personally.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2014

Comment from L.M.Mullins

Excellent

Excellent poem you have here. It pulls the reader in to ask and try and answer the many questions you ask. The free style flows well and your message is clear.
LM

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2014

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Deepwater, there is nothing better in life than to have true love ...someone you wants to be there for you...forever...so very nicely written...and I love the picture...

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2014

Comment from freepass

Excellent

Another 2 ribbon Gem!
This will be one great book
Good luck with it
You should Qualify for the "Quality seal on all your stuff!
5 very big stars*****
Good luck

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2014

Comment from acerisestory

Excellent

This is a lovely free verse poem, GW. Your use of alliteration is nicely done with love/life, dare/dream, cold/change, to name a few. I particularly liked the last line: 'Only to replenish yourself with the next winds of change>' Thanks for sharing. Alana

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2014

Comment from pattipac

Excellent

You poem reveals your yearning for love that will withstand the test of time, and not be whisk away by the 'cold winds of change."

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2014