Thank God I'm Unemployed!
I don't have time for a job44 total reviews
Comment from barkingdog
Hi steve,
With all of these chores, I'm glad that you had time to write them down in perfectly metered, rhyming quatrains with an alliteration here and there and fine use of enjambment.
If this is your list, I'm wondering, now,about your wife's.
I love the title. LOL
And who told you what goes on at my house?
We'd better spray those fruit trees there;
Their leaves are turnin' black.
The neighbour's cow's out on the road;
Let's go and drive her back,
Then chop and stack the firewood
And fix that leaky tap;
The water pump's gone on the fritz,
The front gate has a gap,
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
Hi steve,
With all of these chores, I'm glad that you had time to write them down in perfectly metered, rhyming quatrains with an alliteration here and there and fine use of enjambment.
If this is your list, I'm wondering, now,about your wife's.
I love the title. LOL
And who told you what goes on at my house?
We'd better spray those fruit trees there;
Their leaves are turnin' black.
The neighbour's cow's out on the road;
Let's go and drive her back,
Then chop and stack the firewood
And fix that leaky tap;
The water pump's gone on the fritz,
The front gate has a gap,
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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SWMBO has a different kind of list....
Thanks for the kind words
Steve
Comment from visionary1234
Gosh, I didn't notice that you lived at my place Steve! Sounds like MY worklist (except, of course, I"m SWMBO AND DON'T FORGET IT!) One more thing today though - a guest called to say a bloody CAT had died outside their cottage ... so we had to send the poor thing to Happy Hunting Ground for Cats ... just part of the everyday fun ... :)
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
Gosh, I didn't notice that you lived at my place Steve! Sounds like MY worklist (except, of course, I"m SWMBO AND DON'T FORGET IT!) One more thing today though - a guest called to say a bloody CAT had died outside their cottage ... so we had to send the poor thing to Happy Hunting Ground for Cats ... just part of the everyday fun ... :)
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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I hope you held a suitable dervice for poor pussy....
Thanks for the kind words.
Steve
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Yes, a 'dervice' is about what we had dear ... with a dovel in the dirt under a druit tree ...
Comment from writing2inspire
Thank you for the laugh. Great poem. You could have shortened it a bit and still been as effective. About three quarters of the way through the poem some of the "to do" items were too close to home and I started to panic at thought of all the things I needed to do. Humor is great medicine. Keep on doing it.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
Thank you for the laugh. Great poem. You could have shortened it a bit and still been as effective. About three quarters of the way through the poem some of the "to do" items were too close to home and I started to panic at thought of all the things I needed to do. Humor is great medicine. Keep on doing it.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Thank you. This funny stuff is probably what I do best...
Steve
Comment from Gypsy Starchild
*We'll get them prozen and preserved
I assume this should be frozen...
*Are veges meant to grow,
veggies?
Overall I really enjoyed this poem... It reads well both silently and aloud, only a couple of typos. :)
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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
*We'll get them prozen and preserved
I assume this should be frozen...
*Are veges meant to grow,
veggies?
Overall I really enjoyed this poem... It reads well both silently and aloud, only a couple of typos. :)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Thank you - glad you enjoyed.
Steve