5/7/5 (Leaves in Fright)
Leaves float back to tree, so frightened.121 total reviews
Comment from TOMORAL
This is a winner in my opinion. Leaves jumping back on trees in fright leaves a lasting impression. Best of luck in the contest. You have my vote.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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This is a winner in my opinion. Leaves jumping back on trees in fright leaves a lasting impression. Best of luck in the contest. You have my vote.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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I didn't win. But, thanks for reading. livelylinda
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a thought-provoking poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. The writer tells the reader about the strange things that can happen and go bump at Halloween time.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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This is a thought-provoking poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. The writer tells the reader about the strange things that can happen and go bump at Halloween time.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Cry the Vile Rebel
The sixth star was for the lovely spin on the usual image of leave gently falling or being swept up by gusts of wind. Leaves taking fright...the word play made me smile, even as I shivered at the image of them scurrying back to a safe haven to weather out the night. Well done.
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The sixth star was for the lovely spin on the usual image of leave gently falling or being swept up by gusts of wind. Leaves taking fright...the word play made me smile, even as I shivered at the image of them scurrying back to a safe haven to weather out the night. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Thank you for acknowledging the creativity.
Comment from barrieblakeway
OK, great thought! Stirs the imagination and stirred mine!
I am still seeing that happen, you have a sense of humour plus!
Thanks for the laugh (oh,you were not serious seeing its Halloween..were you?)
bye
baz
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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OK, great thought! Stirs the imagination and stirred mine!
I am still seeing that happen, you have a sense of humour plus!
Thanks for the laugh (oh,you were not serious seeing its Halloween..were you?)
bye
baz
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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I have a tremendous sense of humor so laugh at will. . .and thanks for reading and enjoying this attempt of creativity.
Comment from emrpoems
This haiku 5-7-5 fulfills the requirement of the contest.
'twas Halloween eve
dead leaves jumped back onto trees
so raw was their fright --A real Halloween experience
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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This haiku 5-7-5 fulfills the requirement of the contest.
'twas Halloween eve
dead leaves jumped back onto trees
so raw was their fright --A real Halloween experience
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
Comment from goompa
Wonderful imagery in this scary poem. Says a lot in just a few words. Great job and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Wonderful imagery in this scary poem. Says a lot in just a few words. Great job and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
A great visual poem my friend. You give real power to each and every word. Thank you for the awes visual snapshot of Mother Nature"s jokes.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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A great visual poem my friend. You give real power to each and every word. Thank you for the awes visual snapshot of Mother Nature"s jokes.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from simplyteresa
Wow, this is an intriguing thought and eerie idea, a great Halloween poem and contest entry. Good luck in the contest. The picture compliments your work well.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Wow, this is an intriguing thought and eerie idea, a great Halloween poem and contest entry. Good luck in the contest. The picture compliments your work well.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from Sueellen11
A very good entry into this 5/7/5 poetry contest,,you have met the contest requirements,,, your pictures matches your poem,,so well, good luck,,,blessings,,,sueellen
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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A very good entry into this 5/7/5 poetry contest,,you have met the contest requirements,,, your pictures matches your poem,,so well, good luck,,,blessings,,,sueellen
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Thanks for reading.
Comment from rjuselius
"'twas Halloween eve
dead leaves jumped back onto trees
so raw was their fright"
interesting metaphor: trees welcoming without a worry of their nudedness.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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"'twas Halloween eve
dead leaves jumped back onto trees
so raw was their fright"
interesting metaphor: trees welcoming without a worry of their nudedness.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Thank you for reading.