Poems By AnnieDawn
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a lovely free verse. It reads gracefully and contains an inspiring message of faith by compelling the reader to trust that He is there even in the darkest of times. A most worthy contest entry and I wish you all . Thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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This is a lovely free verse. It reads gracefully and contains an inspiring message of faith by compelling the reader to trust that He is there even in the darkest of times. A most worthy contest entry and I wish you all . Thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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Thank you very much for your review and comments. I really appreciate any and all ideas from my peers.
Comment from queenv
Yes, sometimes we all need a helping hand be it seen or unseen. I like the message in the poem. It has a good rhythm pattern. The picture reflects the message of the poem.
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Yes, sometimes we all need a helping hand be it seen or unseen. I like the message in the poem. It has a good rhythm pattern. The picture reflects the message of the poem.
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Thank you very much for your review and comments. I really appreciate any and all ideas from my peers.
Comment from Colette
Those words "come lean on me" when you think you are on your
own only your troubles, hand them over to your Creator and feel the sense of relief.
A beautiful reassuring contest entry, I wish you well.
Colette
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Those words "come lean on me" when you think you are on your
own only your troubles, hand them over to your Creator and feel the sense of relief.
A beautiful reassuring contest entry, I wish you well.
Colette
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much for your review and comments. I really appreciate any and all ideas from my peers.
Comment from TAB_that's me
It sounds like a person who was losing faith but in the end they leaned on Jesus. Good poem for the faith contest:)
~Teresa~
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It sounds like a person who was losing faith but in the end they leaned on Jesus. Good poem for the faith contest:)
~Teresa~
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Thank you very much for your review and comments. I really appreciate any and all ideas from my peers.
Comment from Keturah Martin
This poem is awesome and came across my screen right in a time where I feel like throwing in the towel. Sometimes the after-effects of decades of abuse is engulfing. The faith is amazing and most surely the writing glorifies God. Keep writing for Him.
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This poem is awesome and came across my screen right in a time where I feel like throwing in the towel. Sometimes the after-effects of decades of abuse is engulfing. The faith is amazing and most surely the writing glorifies God. Keep writing for Him.
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Thank you very much for your review and comments. I really appreciate any and all ideas from my peers.
Comment from in777wr#
This is a very encouraging poem. Many times when we feel that we;re at our wit's end God steps in, and reminds us he's still there. I loved the message of this poem. Very encouraging.
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This is a very encouraging poem. Many times when we feel that we;re at our wit's end God steps in, and reminds us he's still there. I loved the message of this poem. Very encouraging.
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I am so thankful for the time you all take for reviews and comments.I thank you very much.
Comment from Gungalo
"Come hither my child, take My hand.
I will carry your burden if you lean on Me.
Don't give up; I will help you to stand."
He is always there to help you no matter what the circumstances.
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"Come hither my child, take My hand.
I will carry your burden if you lean on Me.
Don't give up; I will help you to stand."
He is always there to help you no matter what the circumstances.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much for your review and comments. I really appreciate any and all ideas from my peers.
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Comment from PoeticXscape
I enjoyed this very much. Many of us have been down and sad but get lifted up when we need it the most. The last line was powerful. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing.
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I enjoyed this very much. Many of us have been down and sad but get lifted up when we need it the most. The last line was powerful. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much for your review and comments. I really appreciate any and all ideas from my peers.