They Never Stop Loving You
A dog can lift your spirits....46 total reviews
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. You are so right. A dog can be a girls best friend. This picture is so cute. Every little girl need a dog. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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I love the picture. You are so right. A dog can be a girls best friend. This picture is so cute. Every little girl need a dog. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much Nellie, I appreciate your nice comments. You're right, I think everyone that can, should have a dog. They're just so loving. Have a great weekend my friend.
Comment from adewpearl
great pairing of photo and poem, which adorably points out the value of a dog in a person's life
good 5/7/5 syllable count just so I say diamond in three syllables :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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great pairing of photo and poem, which adorably points out the value of a dog in a person's life
good 5/7/5 syllable count just so I say diamond in three syllables :-) Brooke
Comment Written 31-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Thanks for your review, I appreciate it. The syllable counter that I use online, "howmanysyllables.com" shows that "diamonds" has 3 syllables. Have a great weekend my friend.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I love this because it's so true. Diamonds are pretty and I have a couple but if I had to pick between my diamonds and a dog it would definitely be the dog. Great job
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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I love this because it's so true. Diamonds are pretty and I have a couple but if I had to pick between my diamonds and a dog it would definitely be the dog. Great job
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Thank you for your review, I appreciate it. I'm glad you liked it. Have a great day.
Comment from l.raven
OMG, I love this...your are so very right...they are there unconditionally and love you forever..I loveeeeeeee your poem and the picture says it all...
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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OMG, I love this...your are so very right...they are there unconditionally and love you forever..I loveeeeeeee your poem and the picture says it all...
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thank you my old friend, I'm glad you enjoyed it. When I first saw that picture the words just popped into my head. And you're right, I'm 68 years old and I've had many dogs throughout my lifetime and they all showed love and compassion that humans just don't show. Take care my friend and thanks again...
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you are so very welcome...xxoo
Comment from ButterflyHana
You 5-7-5 poem sound so interesting. The picture perfectly describes the poem and sets the mood, nice one.
But I would suggest, if you don't mind, that the first letter of each line should be in capitals. Other than that it's a sweet little poetry. Sometimes, diamonds aren't a girls best friend, when it comes to isolation. May be then the company of a dog or any pet or a real friend, is definitely comforting. Thanks for sharing.
BHana.
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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You 5-7-5 poem sound so interesting. The picture perfectly describes the poem and sets the mood, nice one.
But I would suggest, if you don't mind, that the first letter of each line should be in capitals. Other than that it's a sweet little poetry. Sometimes, diamonds aren't a girls best friend, when it comes to isolation. May be then the company of a dog or any pet or a real friend, is definitely comforting. Thanks for sharing.
BHana.
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and for your suggestion. However, according to the rules, this type of poetry is written like the Japanese haikus and senryus, with no capitals. The only difference is that the 5-7-5 can be about any subject. I do appreciate your suggestion. Have a great day my friend.
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Welcome. Oh, I didn't know that haiku poems don't use capitals. Sorry about that, but thanks for the info.
Tc, have a nice day, my friend. ")
BHana.
Comment from Merriweather
Thought this poem was great. I was totally surprised by the content after the title as there are many broken hearts on this site that are subjects of poems. The picture is amazing, and your words even more so. I think that belongs on a poster somewhere. You have a winner here.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thought this poem was great. I was totally surprised by the content after the title as there are many broken hearts on this site that are subjects of poems. The picture is amazing, and your words even more so. I think that belongs on a poster somewhere. You have a winner here.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and rating, I appreciate it. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. Also, welcome to this site. I hope you have a long enjoyable stay my friend.