Writings From the Heart
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Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
your words captured my attention from the first line to
the last.
thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
your words captured my attention from the first line to
the last.
thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Thank you
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You're very welcome. Until next time.
Cookie
Comment from flamingstar
I'm a bit confused by this one. Did the relationship survive? I don't understand the meaning of "Heed of direction, to things that were planned," nor do I get the "My trust is the nightmare..." Are you saying your suspicions of infidelity tore you apart? Are you starting over alone? Also, one of my pet peeves is awkward combos like "contemplate on." The "on" is redundant; you might reflect ON something but you wouldn't contemplate on it. Sorry.
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I'm a bit confused by this one. Did the relationship survive? I don't understand the meaning of "Heed of direction, to things that were planned," nor do I get the "My trust is the nightmare..." Are you saying your suspicions of infidelity tore you apart? Are you starting over alone? Also, one of my pet peeves is awkward combos like "contemplate on." The "on" is redundant; you might reflect ON something but you wouldn't contemplate on it. Sorry.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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You are sorry
Comment from gypsycaravan
Oh, too many "together forever" scenarios in our world. Whatever happened to "for better or worse" in our vows. You describe the tragedy well. Thank you for posting.
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Oh, too many "together forever" scenarios in our world. Whatever happened to "for better or worse" in our vows. You describe the tragedy well. Thank you for posting.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Smoothiecool
your well chosen words allow the reader to see and feel the journey of life with its ups and downs along the way and what is still in store for one
good visual to portray message
good rhyme through out
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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your well chosen words allow the reader to see and feel the journey of life with its ups and downs along the way and what is still in store for one
good visual to portray message
good rhyme through out
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Thank you
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welcome..SC
Comment from Bryana
You are certainly a prolific writer of beautiful
poems, I love this one.
I love these lines...
Values of honor, scarred deep in my heart
Now I contemplate in life's new surprise,
What is to happen, can you surmise?
Have a wonderful Sunday.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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You are certainly a prolific writer of beautiful
poems, I love this one.
I love these lines...
Values of honor, scarred deep in my heart
Now I contemplate in life's new surprise,
What is to happen, can you surmise?
Have a wonderful Sunday.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Thank you again
Comment from Rainbowsofhappiness
Brilliant wording and the final line asked as a question to the reader allows the poem to resonate with them. This piece flows smoothly with an even pace. The lines transition exquisitely from one to the other. So many of the lines reverberate in my mind and I definitely can relate to this piece. It is a six star piece because the poet gets the reader to feel emotion through the well chosen words that create the lines, and emotes feelings of their own through this poem. The experiences described in the lines are relatable to all individuals and create a clear sense of emotional imagery. The accompanying photo is perfectly suited to reflect the words and thoughts of this piece. Eloquently written to bring to the surface those emotions that often get shoved deep down inside a soul.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Brilliant wording and the final line asked as a question to the reader allows the poem to resonate with them. This piece flows smoothly with an even pace. The lines transition exquisitely from one to the other. So many of the lines reverberate in my mind and I definitely can relate to this piece. It is a six star piece because the poet gets the reader to feel emotion through the well chosen words that create the lines, and emotes feelings of their own through this poem. The experiences described in the lines are relatable to all individuals and create a clear sense of emotional imagery. The accompanying photo is perfectly suited to reflect the words and thoughts of this piece. Eloquently written to bring to the surface those emotions that often get shoved deep down inside a soul.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Thank you rainbow
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Quite welcome!
Comment from skye
Wonderful questions about the survival of love, and in a larger sense, life.
We survive because we are made to be resiliant.
We live and love because we are human.
We hurt because we have a physical body.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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Wonderful questions about the survival of love, and in a larger sense, life.
We survive because we are made to be resiliant.
We live and love because we are human.
We hurt because we have a physical body.
Excellent.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
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Thank you Skye
Comment from Lastamen
A thought provoking testament on the varying attributes of the living experience. The expression: "My trust is the nightmare, that played us a-part," cuts to a depth of passion and love lost. Well done.
Till the last amen
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A thought provoking testament on the varying attributes of the living experience. The expression: "My trust is the nightmare, that played us a-part," cuts to a depth of passion and love lost. Well done.
Till the last amen
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from w.j.debi
All the things that make a relationship work or break apart seem to be contained in your verse. It could have been a beautiful and lasting love except trust and truth were not practiced by both.
Such a sad line and beautiful line to contemplate
Values of honor, scarred deep on my heart,
My trust is the nightmare, that played us a-part.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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All the things that make a relationship work or break apart seem to be contained in your verse. It could have been a beautiful and lasting love except trust and truth were not practiced by both.
Such a sad line and beautiful line to contemplate
Values of honor, scarred deep on my heart,
My trust is the nightmare, that played us a-part.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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Thank you Wj
Comment from costellsgirl33
This is incredibly beautifully! A poem that really makes you stop and think and maybe reflect a little. Or a lot.
I love the line, "My trust is the nightmare, that played us a-part." I love it
Very nice job
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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This is incredibly beautifully! A poem that really makes you stop and think and maybe reflect a little. Or a lot.
I love the line, "My trust is the nightmare, that played us a-part." I love it
Very nice job
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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Thank you
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You are welcome
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You are welcome
