Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "But best is the ice-cream "A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Glasstruth
Very carefree, and that child shows in you. Gulls, ice cream and a hot summer day on the beach. What more could one ask. Great flow. Nice rhyming. Sounds like the perfect day. Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Very carefree, and that child shows in you. Gulls, ice cream and a hot summer day on the beach. What more could one ask. Great flow. Nice rhyming. Sounds like the perfect day. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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thank you les
Comment from Lastamen
Through the eyes of a child the world should well be a place of wonder and delight. This is an excellent take on that bliss of childhood and splendor. Well done.
Till the last amen
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Through the eyes of a child the world should well be a place of wonder and delight. This is an excellent take on that bliss of childhood and splendor. Well done.
Till the last amen
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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thank you for this
Comment from chasennov
Chapter 35 of the book Writings From the Heart through the eyes of a child "But best is the ice-cream" I enjoyed this poem you have crafted here, looking at life through the eyes of a child. It tells me a lot about your childhood and the things most important in your life. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Chapter 35 of the book Writings From the Heart through the eyes of a child "But best is the ice-cream" I enjoyed this poem you have crafted here, looking at life through the eyes of a child. It tells me a lot about your childhood and the things most important in your life. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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thank you
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Comment from Titan Black
This was a good poem. But, the poetic alliteration needs work. Nevertheless, the substance and subject matter at hand, was hot. As well as the fact that you can see from the eyes of the child. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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This was a good poem. But, the poetic alliteration needs work. Nevertheless, the substance and subject matter at hand, was hot. As well as the fact that you can see from the eyes of the child. Keep writing.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from Oatmeal
DW,
A cute little number. The subject is very nice. The flow is fairly smooth. The visions your words put into my mind were sweet. It was a pleasure to read.
There was no SPAG. It was very clean.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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DW,
A cute little number. The subject is very nice. The flow is fairly smooth. The visions your words put into my mind were sweet. It was a pleasure to read.
There was no SPAG. It was very clean.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from lalajovanoski
I can see the outflow of deep emotion from the heart in this work. An emotion depicting a betrayal of love and trust. Yes, it'd happens and it will continue to happen inasmuch as man's heart construction is not written on his face. Nicely rendered. Exquisitely composed. Love LJ
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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I can see the outflow of deep emotion from the heart in this work. An emotion depicting a betrayal of love and trust. Yes, it'd happens and it will continue to happen inasmuch as man's heart construction is not written on his face. Nicely rendered. Exquisitely composed. Love LJ
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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thank you LJ
Comment from skye
Wonderful artwork accents the message inside this poem.
I love the memories looking back to when I was a child, and you captured many of them inside this nicely rhymed poem.
Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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Wonderful artwork accents the message inside this poem.
I love the memories looking back to when I was a child, and you captured many of them inside this nicely rhymed poem.
Well done.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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thank you Skye
Comment from Trybuck
Luke 18:17 Verily I say unto you, Whosoever shall not receive the kingdom of God as a little child shall in no wise enter therein.
A child believes whole heartedly..
Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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Luke 18:17 Verily I say unto you, Whosoever shall not receive the kingdom of God as a little child shall in no wise enter therein.
A child believes whole heartedly..
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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thank you Buck
Comment from janalma
I liked this. It is a good reminiscence of what an adult remembers feeling, when they were young and free of worry and details. And I do remember the home made ice cream at my grandma's. My dad absolutely loved it. I don't care that much for vanilla ice cream (which it always was) but those were happy times. Well written poem with no awkward phrasing and your one rhyme is well done with appropriate words.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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I liked this. It is a good reminiscence of what an adult remembers feeling, when they were young and free of worry and details. And I do remember the home made ice cream at my grandma's. My dad absolutely loved it. I don't care that much for vanilla ice cream (which it always was) but those were happy times. Well written poem with no awkward phrasing and your one rhyme is well done with appropriate words.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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thank you for this
Comment from Domino 2
The artwork reminds me of our family trips to the seaside, and the simple fun that was had in the sand. Nowadays, kids would need a laptop to hand to research how to build sandcastles. :-)
Very nice read with lots of innocent and vivid imagery.
Cheers, Ray
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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The artwork reminds me of our family trips to the seaside, and the simple fun that was had in the sand. Nowadays, kids would need a laptop to hand to research how to build sandcastles. :-)
Very nice read with lots of innocent and vivid imagery.
Cheers, Ray
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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thanks Ray
