Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I'm so glad you did, Ric, it's really good. Is this for the Potlatch Challenge? I reads like it could be. I was surprised at the twist at the end. She killed him! And I thought she liked him, too. Well done, my friend. :) Sandra xx

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 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016

Thank you so much, Sandra Mitchell, my sweet friend, for taking time to read my story. I guess it couldn't have been for the Patlatch Challenge, but truthfully, I just posted something because a nice person asked me to. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

It is nice to read your work again my friend. It is full of great wording and good imagery with your words. I prefer mush writes but you did a good job. Teri

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 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016

Thank you so much, Teri, my friend, for taking time to read my story. At least the first half was mushy. LOL! Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated! :-)

reply by Teri7 on 27-Jun-2016

lol you are so welcome. Teri