The Tower
I'll do it.41 total reviews
Comment from oliver818
Very interesting story. I like the way nothing is really cleared up, it's just events portrayed through dialogue.
I found a missing pronoun for you too- Jay didn't see him, since was looking down at me.
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
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Very interesting story. I like the way nothing is really cleared up, it's just events portrayed through dialogue.
I found a missing pronoun for you too- Jay didn't see him, since was looking down at me.
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
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Thank you, Oliver, for being my "eyes" in this reading. I made the correction, and really appreciate your time and your kind generosity.