Friendship
Acrostic-Loop46 total reviews
Comment from G.K.Phoenix
Hi.
Thanks for sharing your poem. I'm new to this site and I have not seen this style before. I like it and find the repetition to be effective. Keep it up.
Cheers.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Hi.
Thanks for sharing your poem. I'm new to this site and I have not seen this style before. I like it and find the repetition to be effective. Keep it up.
Cheers.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Welcome and Thank you, this is my first try at this type, I too am recently new this is a great site for trying the different, enjoy
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Combination poem you have penned for the contest. This made me think of the Loop poem, that is what I thought it was. Very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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This is a very well written Combination poem you have penned for the contest. This made me think of the Loop poem, that is what I thought it was. Very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much
Comment from poetwatch
Wow! What a way to speak of finding the truth about people. (Or this is what I think you're saying?) Trust is hard to find if one hides in a corner. But in making friends it's always the distrust in the words they say. Yet, if one does not make friends one never know if they speak true or with fork tongue. There is strength in the number of friends one has and there is also heartaches. But one has to give friendship a chance and hope for a better world.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Wow! What a way to speak of finding the truth about people. (Or this is what I think you're saying?) Trust is hard to find if one hides in a corner. But in making friends it's always the distrust in the words they say. Yet, if one does not make friends one never know if they speak true or with fork tongue. There is strength in the number of friends one has and there is also heartaches. But one has to give friendship a chance and hope for a better world.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much for this great review
Comment from dboverton
I enjoyed this. I did read it twice so I could feel it even stronger than the first time I read it. You used the word intent? Intention is a misunderstood word I believe. I feel our intentions are everything in Life. Our Life and their outcome is all definitive on our intentions, ya?! Thank you for sharing this piece.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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I enjoyed this. I did read it twice so I could feel it even stronger than the first time I read it. You used the word intent? Intention is a misunderstood word I believe. I feel our intentions are everything in Life. Our Life and their outcome is all definitive on our intentions, ya?! Thank you for sharing this piece.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much ya I agree
Comment from B.B. Rose
You certainly chose two complicated forms for your entry. I admire your courage. So, I read it from top to bottom and then back up again and the first line spelled friendship. And while I got confused every now and again, the message certainly came through nicely. The importance of the strength and encouragement we get from others (friendship) and how it helps us keep hope for what is to come. While challenging and complex, I enjoyed playing with it's many aspects. B.B. Rose
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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You certainly chose two complicated forms for your entry. I admire your courage. So, I read it from top to bottom and then back up again and the first line spelled friendship. And while I got confused every now and again, the message certainly came through nicely. The importance of the strength and encouragement we get from others (friendship) and how it helps us keep hope for what is to come. While challenging and complex, I enjoyed playing with it's many aspects. B.B. Rose
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much, while I'm learning new forms might as well start complicated
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the role and responsibility of friendship, that real people who are in friendship would encourage new start of every day and find strength and hope for living; I liked.
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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This speaks the role and responsibility of friendship, that real people who are in friendship would encourage new start of every day and find strength and hope for living; I liked.
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you for an excellent and positive review
