Politicians
Political loop49 total reviews
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your loop poem "politicians". You followed all the rules very well for this genre. I also liked your art work choice.
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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I enjoyed reading your loop poem "politicians". You followed all the rules very well for this genre. I also liked your art work choice.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from DR DIP
Hehe You are so right and you sum it up in your loop poem perfectly Kahpot.
We vote them in because we like their policies and agendas then find out it was just a ploy to gain enough votes to be elected. Thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Hehe You are so right and you sum it up in your loop poem perfectly Kahpot.
We vote them in because we like their policies and agendas then find out it was just a ploy to gain enough votes to be elected. Thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Excellent example of a loop poem structure! I like that even the first and last word is the same. And I totally agree with the sentiment of the poem about the politicians who lie and obstruct the ability for many to live safely without meaningless bureaucracy.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Excellent example of a loop poem structure! I like that even the first and last word is the same. And I totally agree with the sentiment of the poem about the politicians who lie and obstruct the ability for many to live safely without meaningless bureaucracy.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Kahpot. This is a grand Loop. I don't usually like political pieces, but when they read as well and mean as much as this one does, then I'm always happy that I took the time. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Hello Kahpot. This is a grand Loop. I don't usually like political pieces, but when they read as well and mean as much as this one does, then I'm always happy that I took the time. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, not my usual form just trying new things, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from poetwatch
Good loop poem in more ways than one. We elect them for the promise of leadership, but two tongues always speak false. They say something and it comes out the other end. You captured the politicians place perfectly.thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Good loop poem in more ways than one. We elect them for the promise of leadership, but two tongues always speak false. They say something and it comes out the other end. You captured the politicians place perfectly.thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, I had to laugh at " two tongues" very well said ****kahpot
Comment from B.B. Rose
Cleverly worked out...I did not get the use of the word impaled until I looked it up and saw that it had a another meaning that should have been obvious, but I'd never given it any thought...the idea of a surround as in palisade as well as the meaning of being pierced. I'm not much into these kinds of poems, but thought you had a cogent message despite the difficultty of the form's requirements.
As an aside (IMHO) the blame really is on the voters who never get rid of the SOBs despite year after year of the same old/same old. B.B. Rose
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Cleverly worked out...I did not get the use of the word impaled until I looked it up and saw that it had a another meaning that should have been obvious, but I'd never given it any thought...the idea of a surround as in palisade as well as the meaning of being pierced. I'm not much into these kinds of poems, but thought you had a cogent message despite the difficultty of the form's requirements.
As an aside (IMHO) the blame really is on the voters who never get rid of the SOBs despite year after year of the same old/same old. B.B. Rose
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and I agree once their in we are stuck no matter what****kahpot
Comment from Sallyo
Cleverly done, getting the rhythm pretty right as well as the loop structure. The line beginning "Action" is a little less easy than the others, probably because of the word "surround" having a stress on the second syllable. Altogether very accomplished though.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Cleverly done, getting the rhythm pretty right as well as the loop structure. The line beginning "Action" is a little less easy than the others, probably because of the word "surround" having a stress on the second syllable. Altogether very accomplished though.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much Sallyo, I was tossing up about surround, steer, symbolize etc.But could not find a fit, all help appreciated****kahpot
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ferry, pilot or govern?
Comment from DonandVicki
I like the feeling of your loop-free verse poem. It explains, with almost prose feel to it, about how we all feel about politicians. A lot to consider. Don and Vicki.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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I like the feeling of your loop-free verse poem. It explains, with almost prose feel to it, about how we all feel about politicians. A lot to consider. Don and Vicki.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, I would like to consider how we get them out****kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
Politics to me is nothing more than a swamp of alligators eating the small fish and then blaming the small fish for not seeing them coming after them. Patricia
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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Politics to me is nothing more than a swamp of alligators eating the small fish and then blaming the small fish for not seeing them coming after them. Patricia
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you, I wish I had your review before I posted, as your words are an excellent description, many thanks
