Autumn's arrival
nature 5-7-5 contest entry47 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
written like a haiku with solid imagery and connection
and a fine satori line with play on words
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
written like a haiku with solid imagery and connection
and a fine satori line with play on words
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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Thank you RS for this most excellent review my friend. I love Autumn, one of my favorite times of the year.
God bless
Comment from RodG
Great compo of picture and poem.
Good focus on the visual display of autumn through both alliteration and personification.
I like the double meaning you get from your last line.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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Great compo of picture and poem.
Good focus on the visual display of autumn through both alliteration and personification.
I like the double meaning you get from your last line.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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I enjoy a little play on words my friend. Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Those are a lot of leaves. The poem is great. The picture and poem combination is very clever. Someone wrote a poem recently warning of the dangers of winter. Slipping and falling and so forth. Can you imagine the injury if one of those leaves fell on you?
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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Those are a lot of leaves. The poem is great. The picture and poem combination is very clever. Someone wrote a poem recently warning of the dangers of winter. Slipping and falling and so forth. Can you imagine the injury if one of those leaves fell on you?
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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LOL! Thank you for the awesome review Thomas. I do love Autumn(not the raking of leaves).
God bless!
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
This is a winner if ever I saw one! Wowza! The image of a red carpet is truly inspired. I just love the bold red in both your photo and font. What a triumph in just a few words. So lovely!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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This is a winner if ever I saw one! Wowza! The image of a red carpet is truly inspired. I just love the bold red in both your photo and font. What a triumph in just a few words. So lovely!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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What a beautiful review you have delivered my friend. Thank you
This is certainly my favorite time of the year.
God bless!
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I really was taken with this piece! It?s very special.
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This brings me joy, thank you .
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Comment from heart of Lou
I really love this poem, and the picture is of a perfect red carpet of fall leaves. I would just love to be walking along that path, it is breathtakingly beautiful! You got across the beauty of fall in a very few words. Good job!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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I really love this poem, and the picture is of a perfect red carpet of fall leaves. I would just love to be walking along that path, it is breathtakingly beautiful! You got across the beauty of fall in a very few words. Good job!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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Me too! Autumn is my favorite time of the year.
God bless and thank you for this amazing review.
Comment from kiwijenny
Autumns arrival....Autumn's arrival...needs an apostrophe
Boisterous...so fitting
Red carpet affair even more perfect...nature shows off in autumn doesn't she
God bless
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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Autumns arrival....Autumn's arrival...needs an apostrophe
Boisterous...so fitting
Red carpet affair even more perfect...nature shows off in autumn doesn't she
God bless
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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Thank you Jenny for this most helpful and excellent review my friend. Autumn is my favorite time of the year.
God bless!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 5-7-5 you have penned for the nature 5-7-5 writing prompt. You used a very pretty picture for the imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 you have penned for the nature 5-7-5 writing prompt. You used a very pretty picture for the imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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Thank you Teri for the awesome review my friend.
God bless!
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you are so welcome!