Transthformathion
A life-changing upgrade61 total reviews
Comment from Joy Graham
My mom had all her upper teeth removed. It wasn't an easy adjustment. She's pleased that they went to great effort to make her false teeth look like her teeth did when she was a teenager. Now she likes to smile.
Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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My mom had all her upper teeth removed. It wasn't an easy adjustment. She's pleased that they went to great effort to make her false teeth look like her teeth did when she was a teenager. Now she likes to smile.
Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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I'm happy for her. Good teeth are very important.
Comment from Raul1
This poem is very funny. I have enjoyed it. I like how you structured your poem. Interesting to know enough about teeth in a humorous way. Nice work! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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This poem is very funny. I have enjoyed it. I like how you structured your poem. Interesting to know enough about teeth in a humorous way. Nice work! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thanksth, Raul1!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Alexander Iurovetski
My girth review: Thank you for the authentic poem. Very enjoyable, lively through every line. Neither boring, nor gloomy. No problem giving you thick mark.
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My girth review: Thank you for the authentic poem. Very enjoyable, lively through every line. Neither boring, nor gloomy. No problem giving you thick mark.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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HAHAHAHAH. You are tho generousth! Thanksth!
Comment from LIJ Red
Rhyming couplets with a lithp...I am waiting for the science of implantation to advance a wee bit more....I had a partial which was a
partial success....excellent chuckle here
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Rhyming couplets with a lithp...I am waiting for the science of implantation to advance a wee bit more....I had a partial which was a
partial success....excellent chuckle here
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Ba-doomp boomp, CHINNNNNG! Funny, LlJ Red
Thanks for the fun review.
Comment from Gail Denham
Good going. The worst thing about not having your teeth in - is the sunken shriveled face that stares back at you in the mirror. Well,plus the speech of course. Remember the song "All I want for Chrithmath is my two front teef...
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Good going. The worst thing about not having your teeth in - is the sunken shriveled face that stares back at you in the mirror. Well,plus the speech of course. Remember the song "All I want for Chrithmath is my two front teef...
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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I'm going to take your word on that one, Gail! Thanks for the review.
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
This is funny!
I love how you kept up the lisping all the way through your poem. Even reading it in my head, my tongue was getting tangled!
Well presented and made me laugh :)
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Hello :)
This is funny!
I love how you kept up the lisping all the way through your poem. Even reading it in my head, my tongue was getting tangled!
Well presented and made me laugh :)
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thanksth tho very muth!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about false teeth. It is needed when our own teeth seem to disappear one after the other, we cannot eat or speak properly withouto teeth.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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A very well-written poem about false teeth. It is needed when our own teeth seem to disappear one after the other, we cannot eat or speak properly withouto teeth.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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That's why I'm so conscientious about brushing and flossing!! Missing teeth is my worst nightmare!
Thanks for the review, Sandra.
Comment from Dean Kuch
When 100 women were asked what was the first physical feature they noticed in a man that attracted them most, more than 50% said a nice smile.
28% said kind eyes, 17% said ripped abs, 3% said pretty hair and 2% were undecided.
Having thaid that, I'm thure you'll up your game once you get you new choppers.
Funny entry.
Good luck to you in the contetht.
~Dean
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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When 100 women were asked what was the first physical feature they noticed in a man that attracted them most, more than 50% said a nice smile.
28% said kind eyes, 17% said ripped abs, 3% said pretty hair and 2% were undecided.
Having thaid that, I'm thure you'll up your game once you get you new choppers.
Funny entry.
Good luck to you in the contetht.
~Dean
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thanksth, Dean, for this fasthinating review!!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Patty Palmer
What a delightful poem! Sometimes ya gotta put on the silly hat and just play. It's well written and bouncy! Hope ya get the choppers soon! "Keep on keeping on"
Patty
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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What a delightful poem! Sometimes ya gotta put on the silly hat and just play. It's well written and bouncy! Hope ya get the choppers soon! "Keep on keeping on"
Patty
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thanksth tho muth!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, loving the language here and as I read your words out loud if really worked well, I wish you luck with the contest, I thought this poem was a good approach to the brief, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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He he he, loving the language here and as I read your words out loud if really worked well, I wish you luck with the contest, I thought this poem was a good approach to the brief, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thanksth tho muth, Dolly!!
