Pinnacle of Insight
Just the level of introversion that seeps out forming words62 total reviews
Comment from susand3022
Hello JLR, This is an interesting Acrostic, taking more than one read and some thought, time to ponder and consideration as well. I love a poem that will make you think about it... I'm not very good at writing them, but I enjoy reading them! :)
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Hello JLR, This is an interesting Acrostic, taking more than one read and some thought, time to ponder and consideration as well. I love a poem that will make you think about it... I'm not very good at writing them, but I enjoy reading them! :)
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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My thanks to you! I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment on my work.
Comment from Hitcher
Life is too short to get bogged down trying to be nice to people who don't give a damn about anyone or thing but themselves and theirs. I say be polite, acknowledge them, then move on quickly... life is too short : ))
A well written, thought provoking free verse acrostic. Enjoyable read!
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Life is too short to get bogged down trying to be nice to people who don't give a damn about anyone or thing but themselves and theirs. I say be polite, acknowledge them, then move on quickly... life is too short : ))
A well written, thought provoking free verse acrostic. Enjoyable read!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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My thanks to you! I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment on my work.
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Thought provoking. It's interesting that there is now so much value placed on what people do rather than who they are. We compare ourselves with ourselves and in so doing we often lose sight of how to be.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Thought provoking. It's interesting that there is now so much value placed on what people do rather than who they are. We compare ourselves with ourselves and in so doing we often lose sight of how to be.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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My gratitude is full toward you for taking the time to read and comment on my work....
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is an excellent example of a difficult style. You should do well in the contest. I tried to write an acrostic, but I was told LASKKE,D;IIUD isn't a word.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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This is an excellent example of a difficult style. You should do well in the contest. I tried to write an acrostic, but I was told LASKKE,D;IIUD isn't a word.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I am honored that such an esteemed author, such as your are, has taken the time and read and comment on my work, my sincerest thank you!
Comment from Janilou
It's a great entry. I would suggest you try to trim the first sentence so it doesn't overlap and ruin your a rustic.
Otherwise, it's great!
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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It's a great entry. I would suggest you try to trim the first sentence so it doesn't overlap and ruin your a rustic.
Otherwise, it's great!
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I do appreciate your taking the time to read and comment on my work. With great respect, I am learning....
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This well-written acrostic poem speaks volumes! It made me think of
people who call others indecisive, wishy-washy--or even hypocritical--
for changing long-held opinions. For goodness sake, sometimes we
realize we've simply been WRONG about something! I like this poem.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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This well-written acrostic poem speaks volumes! It made me think of
people who call others indecisive, wishy-washy--or even hypocritical--
for changing long-held opinions. For goodness sake, sometimes we
realize we've simply been WRONG about something! I like this poem.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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I greatly appreciate your comments, they are so encouraging!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello JLR: I like the way you defined the: by not being very fond of incredibly difficult people. I find myself in that same circumstance occasionally. I read your verse interpreted it that you can change your mind. I like your last line a lot. Good job. -Robert-
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Hello JLR: I like the way you defined the: by not being very fond of incredibly difficult people. I find myself in that same circumstance occasionally. I read your verse interpreted it that you can change your mind. I like your last line a lot. Good job. -Robert-
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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My sincere thanks for your time to read and comment on this work.
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You're welcome.
Comment from dragonpoet
This free acrostic seems to be about the pinnacle of understanding.
Life's happiness comes acting on your thoughts not just resting on your laurels. Forgiving is important.
Good luck and keep writing.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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This free acrostic seems to be about the pinnacle of understanding.
Life's happiness comes acting on your thoughts not just resting on your laurels. Forgiving is important.
Good luck and keep writing.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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I am so grateful for your taking the time and making the effort to comment on this work. Thank you!
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No problem, JLR.
~dp
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I read your poem twice to try and understand your words, I do try to navigate difficult people and never let them get too close because life can be difficult enough without complicating it further. I expect this is what you are saying here in your acrostic. Easy going people are much more pleasant to be with, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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I read your poem twice to try and understand your words, I do try to navigate difficult people and never let them get too close because life can be difficult enough without complicating it further. I expect this is what you are saying here in your acrostic. Easy going people are much more pleasant to be with, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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I again thank you for your time investment to read and comment on this piece. I thank you!
Comment from Coco Jane
An interesting look at an approach to difficult people.
"Climbing up a slippery slope" is a neat oxymoron, since we generally think of such slopes as being something we fall down.
The last line is thought-provoking.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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An interesting look at an approach to difficult people.
"Climbing up a slippery slope" is a neat oxymoron, since we generally think of such slopes as being something we fall down.
The last line is thought-provoking.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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I am so grateful for your time to read and comment it is so encouraging! thank you!
