Achievement:Intensity of CAN!
Yea, I CAN, such say-er succeeds...53 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
Your opening lines are spot on for the basis of successful achievement. It is said that all good things come from the Lord. Looking to Him for guidance is the perfect path to 'I Can'. I enjoyed reading this very much. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Your opening lines are spot on for the basis of successful achievement. It is said that all good things come from the Lord. Looking to Him for guidance is the perfect path to 'I Can'. I enjoyed reading this very much. Best wishes!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Spangle,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by Best Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from misscookie
I love the words to your poem and the artwork you choose is a perfect match
you captured my attention from the first line to the last when I saw the cutting off the letter- T -I thought how I raise my children and grand children the word cant
is not to be said in our house or your minds, for God created you for a purpose and not to fail by saying you can't before you tried
Cookie
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I love the words to your poem and the artwork you choose is a perfect match
you captured my attention from the first line to the last when I saw the cutting off the letter- T -I thought how I raise my children and grand children the word cant
is not to be said in our house or your minds, for God created you for a purpose and not to fail by saying you can't before you tried
Cookie
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Cookie,
Thank you very much for your so EXCELLENT and ENCOURAGING words.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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Your very welcome, have a nice day
cookie
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Well written with a very effective photo to accompany. You are right. We have to at least start with I CAN. I think TRY is in the plan someplace. Can't just negates all effort. You did a great job with this. Very effective and upbeat. Well done and good luck!
Wendy
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Well written with a very effective photo to accompany. You are right. We have to at least start with I CAN. I think TRY is in the plan someplace. Can't just negates all effort. You did a great job with this. Very effective and upbeat. Well done and good luck!
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Wendy,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by Good Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Ogden
There is no doubt that those who believe they cannot do something, are very unlikely to succeed in that effort, or even try to succeed. I, personally, do believe in the power of positive thinking, or 'I Can' that helps strivers attain their goals.
Ogden IDon)
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There is no doubt that those who believe they cannot do something, are very unlikely to succeed in that effort, or even try to succeed. I, personally, do believe in the power of positive thinking, or 'I Can' that helps strivers attain their goals.
Ogden IDon)
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Ogden,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by Good Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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You are most welcome, RP.
Don
Comment from royowen
I've always been something of an optimist, but when I met God, that took optimism to certainty. I love this form of poetry, smooth stanzas in tetrameter and articulate flowing narrative in aabb rhyming and a language Rich narrative, we'll done, RP. Good luck, blessings, Roy
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I've always been something of an optimist, but when I met God, that took optimism to certainty. I love this form of poetry, smooth stanzas in tetrameter and articulate flowing narrative in aabb rhyming and a language Rich narrative, we'll done, RP. Good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Roy,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by Good Luck Wishes and Blessings.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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A pleasure RP
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Achievement:Intensity of CAN!", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. To me this is a six, but unfortunately I'm never given enough of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Achievement:Intensity of CAN!", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. To me this is a six, but unfortunately I'm never given enough of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Hello the Duchess,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by VIRTUAL SIX STARS.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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~RP, as always, you're more than welcome,
Take care and God bless,
the Duchess
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a powerfully written I can poem, my friend. I don't understand this line:
Yea, I can, such say-er succeeds (say-er)?
Best wishes inthe contest, my friend~Debbie
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This is a powerfully written I can poem, my friend. I don't understand this line:
Yea, I can, such say-er succeeds (say-er)?
Best wishes inthe contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Debbie,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by Best Wishes.
[ For your kind information, 'say-er / sayer' ( as per www. yourdictionary.com ) means 'One who says; One who makes announcements;...]
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from l.raven
Hi RP, I try to live by those words my sweet friend...
my sister and I are complete opposites...she is the I can't girl...I told her I was going to have a tee shirt that says...I CAN"T made for her...and I always try...put your best foot forward and give it a whirl...you just have to believe it can happen...you know RP...God doesn't close one door without opening another...if at first you don't succeed...try,try again...I love you poem sweet guy...and love the picture...very well written...love Linda xxoo
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Hi RP, I try to live by those words my sweet friend...
my sister and I are complete opposites...she is the I can't girl...I told her I was going to have a tee shirt that says...I CAN"T made for her...and I always try...put your best foot forward and give it a whirl...you just have to believe it can happen...you know RP...God doesn't close one door without opening another...if at first you don't succeed...try,try again...I love you poem sweet guy...and love the picture...very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
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Hello L. Raven,
Thank you very much for your so heart touching, EXCELLENT and ENCOURAGING words backed by SIX STARS.
Extra HEARTFELT THANKS for the Sparkling Star because it's the only STAR due to which my this poem is having SPARKLING EFFECT.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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LOL...all your poems should shine my sweet friend...sooooooooo very welcome a thousand times...best wishes to you as well...love xxoo
Comment from Sallyo
This is an interesting form and it runs along smoothly. While I don't altogether agree with the sentiment (I have had fifty years of back problems because I said I CAN when I should have said I CAN'T) I see it can be true in some situations and for some people. For those like me, it's a very, very expensive error.
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This is an interesting form and it runs along smoothly. While I don't altogether agree with the sentiment (I have had fifty years of back problems because I said I CAN when I should have said I CAN'T) I see it can be true in some situations and for some people. For those like me, it's a very, very expensive error.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Sallyo,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words in spite of having adverse experiences in life.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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Oh yes, if I could only go back and say, "You know what? I can't carry that 4 gallon can of milk one-handed. One of the men will have to do it."
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This piece is very well-written, exuberant, and uplifting. You have made excellent use of specifics to convey the theme of determination. The main source of this confidence is, as you say, the Lord!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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This piece is very well-written, exuberant, and uplifting. You have made excellent use of specifics to convey the theme of determination. The main source of this confidence is, as you say, the Lord!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Janice Canerdy,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words.
With best wishes,
~ RP
