Comment from RodG

Excellent

I never thought of Autumn as a seductress, but your metaphor does work here. It won't be long--another month--before we see that "nudity" in my neck of the woods. Rod

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Thank you,Rod, for the awesome review. Here, I believe the leaves have died due to the extreme summer heat we had.
God Bless

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

This is very clever and descriptive. Autumn is my favorite reason, the colors, the crisp air, Halloween! This is a great contest entry, best of luck to you.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Thank you,Boogienights! Your pseudonym takes me back to the 70's. Saturday night fever and all lol.
This is my favorite time of the year as well.
God bless

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the imagery.
-Effective personification
of autumn, as well.
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Thank you, Pam. I always appreciate your awesome reviews.

reply by Pam (respa) on 25-Sep-2020

You are very welcome, and thank you:)

Comment from roof35

Excellent

This is an excellent entry for the five/seven/five contest. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. Your wording is unique.

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 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Thank you, roof. I appreciate the wonderful review and I love unique.