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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Have You Seen My Mummy"Little stories for children in rhyme
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Comment from Anne Johnston
What a beautiful well-written poem for children. The rhyming is very good and it is pleasant to read. Teaches the children about a lot of different things in nature, and especially how butterflies develop. Very well done
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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What a beautiful well-written poem for children. The rhyming is very good and it is pleasant to read. Teaches the children about a lot of different things in nature, and especially how butterflies develop. Very well done
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you so very much for the six stars, Anne, and the lovely review. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one. :))
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You are very welcome
Comment from Sharon Nolen
Loved this one. I really enjoyed how you incorporated pictures to match each little animal the caterpillar encountered on his quest to find his mum.
I thought the use of the line "Sorry! She hasn't been past me!"
Then at the end you ended it with all the creatures saying "Yes, she's been past me!". If I'm not mistaken, the caterpillar didn't see his mum because mum had also become a butterfly. When the caterpillar changed, that's when he noticed his mum. Is that correct?
Anyway, great job on this one.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Loved this one. I really enjoyed how you incorporated pictures to match each little animal the caterpillar encountered on his quest to find his mum.
I thought the use of the line "Sorry! She hasn't been past me!"
Then at the end you ended it with all the creatures saying "Yes, she's been past me!". If I'm not mistaken, the caterpillar didn't see his mum because mum had also become a butterfly. When the caterpillar changed, that's when he noticed his mum. Is that correct?
Anyway, great job on this one.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Yes, that's right. I'm not sure if that is quite right, but the idea was to introduce children to the changes in caterpillars in a fun way. I'm really pleaed you enjoyed it. Thank you. :)
Comment from country ranch writer
This is beautifully written with children in India. They will sit and listen or read the story if the are older and can read. Well done my friend,
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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This is beautifully written with children in India. They will sit and listen or read the story if the are older and can read. Well done my friend,
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much! :)
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☠️Oops the word was supposed to say with children in mind sorry!🙈🙈🙈
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LOL! I wondered what you meant. But I hope children in India will enjoy it too!! lol.
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Forgive me?💁
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Absolutely! :)
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Absolutely! :)
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Absolutely! :)
Comment from Susan Lamphier
What a charming poem! So cleverly written, with the musical sing-song so prevalent in children's picture books. Going through several creatures, and repeating the refrain was cleverly done, and wrapped the story up nicely. Well done!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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What a charming poem! So cleverly written, with the musical sing-song so prevalent in children's picture books. Going through several creatures, and repeating the refrain was cleverly done, and wrapped the story up nicely. Well done!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Susan. I'm so really pleased you liked my poem. :)
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is such a wonderful poem while it is so informative about the various creatures he asks about his mummy. The cacoon and the metamorphosis into a butterfly was the icing on the cake. Great rendering.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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This is such a wonderful poem while it is so informative about the various creatures he asks about his mummy. The cacoon and the metamorphosis into a butterfly was the icing on the cake. Great rendering.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Ralf! xx
Comment from Goodadvicechan
The pictures are nice and add value to the poem. Children will love to see all those creatures.
The poem tells a good story. The title is good: "Have you seen my Mommy?" the caterpillar has asked for help from a ladybird, a frog, a bee, a snail and a spider looking for her mother. Children will love this story.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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The pictures are nice and add value to the poem. Children will love to see all those creatures.
The poem tells a good story. The title is good: "Have you seen my Mommy?" the caterpillar has asked for help from a ladybird, a frog, a bee, a snail and a spider looking for her mother. Children will love this story.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for the lovely six stars and lovely review. I'm so pleased you liked reading this poem. xx
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is very beautifully written children's poem. Great flow and rhyme. I love how Casper was asking has anyone seen his mummy who was now a butterfly. It's so interesting how the caterpillar transforms into a butterfly. Well done good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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This is very beautifully written children's poem. Great flow and rhyme. I love how Casper was asking has anyone seen his mummy who was now a butterfly. It's so interesting how the caterpillar transforms into a butterfly. Well done good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Joanne. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Author, It seems to me that the rhymes in this poem would appeal to any child from 2 to 92. your insertion of the tiny illustrations of Each critter that Casper encountered, made reading this post is sheer delight.
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Dear Author, It seems to me that the rhymes in this poem would appeal to any child from 2 to 92. your insertion of the tiny illustrations of Each critter that Casper encountered, made reading this post is sheer delight.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you! I'm pleased you liked it. :)
