My Clock
My favourite (but testing) thing!52 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a well rhymed and metered write and I adored the sentiment here, my Father builds a Grandfather clock and on the day of his death it stopped, that is the truth! We were all shocked. These clocks have a habit of breaking down and because the are not digital, the keep needing attention! A fine write, much enjoyed, Love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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This is a well rhymed and metered write and I adored the sentiment here, my Father builds a Grandfather clock and on the day of his death it stopped, that is the truth! We were all shocked. These clocks have a habit of breaking down and because the are not digital, the keep needing attention! A fine write, much enjoyed, Love Dolly x
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for your lovely comments and sharing your own experience. Best wishes.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
You're a just poem and a lovely inside here family history and you have an amazing picture to match!
Very well written with rhyming that flows off the tongue. I find your poem to be interesting and informative at the same time very well written. Right and I think a little nod to your father too. I see no issues with your palm aesthetically speaking. I also see no grammatical errors either.
A lovely piece of work and I wish you all the best have a great night!
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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You're a just poem and a lovely inside here family history and you have an amazing picture to match!
Very well written with rhyming that flows off the tongue. I find your poem to be interesting and informative at the same time very well written. Right and I think a little nod to your father too. I see no issues with your palm aesthetically speaking. I also see no grammatical errors either.
A lovely piece of work and I wish you all the best have a great night!
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate all your analysis. Happy Easter!