Schmekel and Clekel McGee
A funny poem72 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this cute, fun, and adorable poem. Fun is always good and it's easy to read. I appreciate you posting it for our reading pleasure.
and with their dog Freckle (dog, Freckle)
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you for sharing this cute, fun, and adorable poem. Fun is always good and it's easy to read. I appreciate you posting it for our reading pleasure.
and with their dog Freckle (dog, Freckle)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Well, thank you Barbara. It is about the fun as well! I appreciate your review!
Comment from Shanbreen
Cute, funny poem. Chasing a racoon is scary---I should know. We had a problem with one hissing at my dog. Anyway, Harry, can you let me know, if you have the inclination or the time, how you went around capitalizing your lines? I know you don't use punctuations but some lines are capitalized and not others. Just curious. I have a lot to learn about writing poetry.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Cute, funny poem. Chasing a racoon is scary---I should know. We had a problem with one hissing at my dog. Anyway, Harry, can you let me know, if you have the inclination or the time, how you went around capitalizing your lines? I know you don't use punctuations but some lines are capitalized and not others. Just curious. I have a lot to learn about writing poetry.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Well, thank you Shanbreen for your review. I really appreciate it! Well, poetry is so subjective, but when it comes to capitalization - some poets use all caps at the first word of each line. Some only use caps on the first word of the stanza. So, it really doesn't matter unless you are entering a contest. Some ask for certain ways to capitialize. So, I look for that. I hope that helps.
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Thank you.
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Your welcome!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Aww this is fun! You've put such personality into each character. But my favourite one of course has got to be Freckle. He's got his priorities spot-on! More adventures of these three please? Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Aww this is fun! You've put such personality into each character. But my favourite one of course has got to be Freckle. He's got his priorities spot-on! More adventures of these three please? Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Debbie. Its' all about the fun! Thank you for your pleasant review! I really appreciate it!
Comment from Janet Foor
A fun and funny poem to read this morning. I can picture the three out at the fair. Sounds like a fun day for the trio. I'm sure you enjoyed writing about them too.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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A fun and funny poem to read this morning. I can picture the three out at the fair. Sounds like a fun day for the trio. I'm sure you enjoyed writing about them too.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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LOL! Yes ma'am I did. It is all about the fun! Thank you for your great review! I really appreciate that!
Comment from June Sargent
Thank you for putting a smile on my face with the antics of these three friends. Nothing more fun than a country fair with cotton candy. I enjoyed this lighthearted piece.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you for putting a smile on my face with the antics of these three friends. Nothing more fun than a country fair with cotton candy. I enjoyed this lighthearted piece.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you June for your review! I really appreciate it!
Comment from Katiemae1977
What a cute, semi-nosenical poem. It's a lot of fun to read and I could Envision all of it. Especially the cotton candy part! LOL.
I Thouroughly enjoyed reading this.
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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What a cute, semi-nosenical poem. It's a lot of fun to read and I could Envision all of it. Especially the cotton candy part! LOL.
I Thouroughly enjoyed reading this.
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you Katiemae for your kind words and I really appreciate your review!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This was so much fun to read and I want Freckle to come visit my house! He can have all the bones he wants because he is the bestest boy! good flow and rhyme throughout and just left me feeling happy, which is a nice way to be left. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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This was so much fun to read and I want Freckle to come visit my house! He can have all the bones he wants because he is the bestest boy! good flow and rhyme throughout and just left me feeling happy, which is a nice way to be left. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Marilyn for the kind words and the review! I really appreciate that!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Well, Freckle sounds the most together of the trio. All he is after is a bone whereas the other two want things that are hard to come by. And I know you like to rhyme bone with cell phone but it doesn't make a lot of sense. Anyway, you tell a tale with flair and if you keep it up you will win the big stuffed bear at the fair.
Jesse
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Well, Freckle sounds the most together of the trio. All he is after is a bone whereas the other two want things that are hard to come by. And I know you like to rhyme bone with cell phone but it doesn't make a lot of sense. Anyway, you tell a tale with flair and if you keep it up you will win the big stuffed bear at the fair.
Jesse
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Jesse. It's all about the fun! I really appreciate your review!
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For you, it is all about the fun.
For me, I like a meaningful message.
Different strokes for different folks.
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Oh, there is always a message. You just have to find it.
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Oh, I see. There is more depth behind the poetry of one Harry Craft.
I'll have to look deeper next time.
Jesse
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Roger that!
Comment from gansach
This is a cute little poem, a nice story, and some good rhymes. I think it would benefit from a bit of re-working to make the rhythm a little smoother, but the idea is good. I enjoyed it and like the photo as an illustration. Best wishes!
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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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This is a cute little poem, a nice story, and some good rhymes. I think it would benefit from a bit of re-working to make the rhythm a little smoother, but the idea is good. I enjoyed it and like the photo as an illustration. Best wishes!
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Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Colorado Owl
Thank you for your fun poem. It made me smile, which is just what I needed today! I had a dog like Freckle. She liked to chase squirrels AND ice cream cones that I would hold for her.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your fun poem. It made me smile, which is just what I needed today! I had a dog like Freckle. She liked to chase squirrels AND ice cream cones that I would hold for her.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Well, thank you Colorado Owl for your review! I really appreicate it!
