'Tis the Season
Ah! Sometimes you just gotta laugh. . .79 total reviews
Comment from paulypaul
a lovely story! I didn't think I'd like it, but you really dragged me into it and kept me there until the very end. no spag or anything i noticed.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2007
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a lovely story! I didn't think I'd like it, but you really dragged me into it and kept me there until the very end. no spag or anything i noticed.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2007
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Well, I am pleased that you stuck around until the end!! It was so mortifying!! Take Care. . . and stop by again. . . most of my writing has some interesting endings!! Take Care. . . diane
Comment from Karen Fay
Well, iit's good to know that someone else shops like I do lol and loves Christmas as much as I do lol I live in Ohio but Michigan has a great year round Christmas store there my minds a blank on the name but it's just wonderful, any how, this was a great story thank you for the smiles that it brought God Bless.......Karen Fay
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2007
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Well, iit's good to know that someone else shops like I do lol and loves Christmas as much as I do lol I live in Ohio but Michigan has a great year round Christmas store there my minds a blank on the name but it's just wonderful, any how, this was a great story thank you for the smiles that it brought God Bless.......Karen Fay
Comment Written 16-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2007
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I wonder if you are thinking of Bronner's in Frankenmuth? Christmas ornaments??!! Well, anyway, thank you so much for reviewing and sharing. . . What a mortifying experience! Take Care. . . diane
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Yep that's the one I collect ornaments thanks bye for now Karen
Comment from dragonqueen1983
what a nightmare that must have been for you. tis well written and your frustration comes through. i like your positve attidute to the whole thing.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2007
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what a nightmare that must have been for you. tis well written and your frustration comes through. i like your positve attidute to the whole thing.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2007
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Ah well! I still love to shop! Thank you for stopping by and for the kind review. . . diane
Comment from mmichelle97219
In similar situations I suffer from diarrhea of the mouth, and sometimes it is intricately laced with sarcasm and venom. I can't help it. I think you handled yourself with dignity and grace, and such restraint. The urge to pop those girls in the nose must have been too much. Nice story.
Michelle
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2007
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In similar situations I suffer from diarrhea of the mouth, and sometimes it is intricately laced with sarcasm and venom. I can't help it. I think you handled yourself with dignity and grace, and such restraint. The urge to pop those girls in the nose must have been too much. Nice story.
Michelle
Comment Written 16-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2007
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Oh. . . I was too mortified to let my tongue become too loose!!! Thank you for your review and for stopping by to read my offering! diane
Comment from SnowBound
That was a good story. I enjoyed the whole thing. No lags in the storyline. I was spellbound right away.
You have a great sense of humor, showing in the story's ending, and also in your language throughout the story.
SnowBound
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2007
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That was a good story. I enjoyed the whole thing. No lags in the storyline. I was spellbound right away.
You have a great sense of humor, showing in the story's ending, and also in your language throughout the story.
SnowBound
Comment Written 16-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2007
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Thank you! How mortifying. ..the whole darn experience! Take care. . .diane
Comment from Kaladore
I thought this was an excellent story. It kept my interest throughout it and was very enjoyable. I liked the humorous ending when it sounded like something even worse was going to happen. Excellent job!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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I thought this was an excellent story. It kept my interest throughout it and was very enjoyable. I liked the humorous ending when it sounded like something even worse was going to happen. Excellent job!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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Well, it was pretty bad - mortifying is more like it. I kept thinking that all of my high school students were going to see my picture on the front page of our local paper - with the earrings still attached! Thank you for your wonderful review. . . diane
Comment from JeanneTW
Very cute and humorous. I got a big kick out of it and a lot of laughs. A great read, and I loved the ending. The story had great imagery. I could just see those earrings dangling from her butt. LOL! All the best, Jeanne
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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Very cute and humorous. I got a big kick out of it and a lot of laughs. A great read, and I loved the ending. The story had great imagery. I could just see those earrings dangling from her butt. LOL! All the best, Jeanne
Comment Written 15-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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Alas! It was my derriere!! Ah. . . the mortification. . . So glad you enjoyed the read. . . not in season, but I so wanted to record it for my family and friends. . . Thank you so much. .. diane
Comment from AlvinTEthington
What a sweet story about all the Christmas mistakes we make! The humor made it even more amusing/! A very delightful holiday story!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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What a sweet story about all the Christmas mistakes we make! The humor made it even more amusing/! A very delightful holiday story!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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Thank you Alvin. . . Not really my best offering, but so many friends requested that I put the experience down on paper, I just felt compelled to do it even tho' it's almost May! Take Care. . . diane
Comment from D. Longo
The third time I've read this delightful story, Mrs KT, it grows warmer with each reading. Thank God for little old ladies. Structure, dialogue, characterizations, setting (particularly setting), excel in this expertly narrated story. "Par," for Mrs KT, translates as, "professional." D.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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The third time I've read this delightful story, Mrs KT, it grows warmer with each reading. Thank God for little old ladies. Structure, dialogue, characterizations, setting (particularly setting), excel in this expertly narrated story. "Par," for Mrs KT, translates as, "professional." D.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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Hello Friend! No. . . not one of my best. . . but friends requested that I put the entire experience on paper. . . so I did.. .Thank you for your kind review! Hope all is well. . . diane
Comment from Showboat
Hi Mrs KT,
So nice to make your acquaintance.
I love your style of writing. Very breezy. Love the asides!
...merchandizing debacle...loved that one! 'An amaretto sour..'?? by that time, I'd have been looking for an iced tea of the Long Island variety!
Doesn't stuff like that just jerk your chain? I know that shoplifting is a holiday sport, and that they don't 'look' any different than us normal folks, but still! A little discernment might be in order.
And yes, I take it 'personal' alright! Hey, thanks for the chuckles.
Gayle
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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Hi Mrs KT,
So nice to make your acquaintance.
I love your style of writing. Very breezy. Love the asides!
...merchandizing debacle...loved that one! 'An amaretto sour..'?? by that time, I'd have been looking for an iced tea of the Long Island variety!
Doesn't stuff like that just jerk your chain? I know that shoplifting is a holiday sport, and that they don't 'look' any different than us normal folks, but still! A little discernment might be in order.
And yes, I take it 'personal' alright! Hey, thanks for the chuckles.
Gayle
Comment Written 15-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2007
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Hello! Just having a bit of fun at my own expense!!! Thank you for stopping by! diane
