Renewal
Home-Made Carpe Diem89 total reviews
Comment from P1
very inspiring read this is a great
piece of writing so the words obviously ment much
to ya. good luck in the contest should do well
hug lynda
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2008
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very inspiring read this is a great
piece of writing so the words obviously ment much
to ya. good luck in the contest should do well
hug lynda
Comment Written 13-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2008
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Thank you, Lynda, for the great review to his work.
Comment from LovnPeace
This is so full of wisdom dear amada. The choice of colors is amazing. Umless my eyes are deceiving me the letters look almost 3 D Wow. Great job. Blessings. L&P2u
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2008
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This is so full of wisdom dear amada. The choice of colors is amazing. Umless my eyes are deceiving me the letters look almost 3 D Wow. Great job. Blessings. L&P2u
Comment Written 13-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2008
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Thank you, L@P2u for the great review to this piece. That picture stole my heart as well.
Comment from Poetic Friend
This poem is well-thought out. The use of tree metaphor gives to express a sense of renewal is clever.
You have a lot of great lines in this poem, the opening and endng stanza. Very impressive!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2008
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This poem is well-thought out. The use of tree metaphor gives to express a sense of renewal is clever.
You have a lot of great lines in this poem, the opening and endng stanza. Very impressive!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2008
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Thank you, Poetic Friend, for the great review, you caught exactly what i was trying to say.
Comment from Scarlettdreams
We do have to take time out for ourselves. It is so easy to get caught up in life. I think you capture the essence of healing renewal quite well here. Bravo
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2008
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We do have to take time out for ourselves. It is so easy to get caught up in life. I think you capture the essence of healing renewal quite well here. Bravo
Comment Written 13-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2008
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Thank you Scarlettdreams for the great review and the understanding comments.
Comment from bluefly
Hi amada,
This is a wonderful poem for the thankful tree contest. I love the way you wrap your thoughts and ideas around tyhe concept of an actual tree and tyhen personify it.
Good luck in the contest.
Scott
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008
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Hi amada,
This is a wonderful poem for the thankful tree contest. I love the way you wrap your thoughts and ideas around tyhe concept of an actual tree and tyhen personify it.
Good luck in the contest.
Scott
Comment Written 13-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008
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Thank you Scott for the most encouraging review. I love it.
Comment from Pen&Ink
Hi amada,
A very nice example of regeneration. Sometimes we must focus on only ourselves. Everyone is entitled to that on occasion. I wouldn't change a thing.
My favorite part:
Most important,
he admonishes:
No self-loathing.
No self-deprecation.
This mission,
I reckon,
has a sure touch
of something divine.
Ray
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008
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Hi amada,
A very nice example of regeneration. Sometimes we must focus on only ourselves. Everyone is entitled to that on occasion. I wouldn't change a thing.
My favorite part:
Most important,
he admonishes:
No self-loathing.
No self-deprecation.
This mission,
I reckon,
has a sure touch
of something divine.
Ray
Comment Written 13-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008
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Thank you Ray for connecting with these lines. I wanted to honor God for his insight in letting see some things I was doing wrong.
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
excellent piece of work i enjoyed reading it very much, i found the red writing heavy going on the eye but apart from that it was very good
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2008
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excellent piece of work i enjoyed reading it very much, i found the red writing heavy going on the eye but apart from that it was very good
Comment Written 13-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2008
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Thank you Goldwell for the review and the comments.
Comment from nora arjuna
hello amada. thanks for this uplifting poem. it's surely something great to read first thing in the morning.
Morning finds my roots
curling in relaxed soil,
My senses morphed
into a splash of lights
i really like what you've written here. take care.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008
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hello amada. thanks for this uplifting poem. it's surely something great to read first thing in the morning.
Morning finds my roots
curling in relaxed soil,
My senses morphed
into a splash of lights
i really like what you've written here. take care.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008
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Thank you for commenting in the special lines. Your reviews are much well taken, dear fellow writer arjuna.
Comment from okiboy
Well, I really loved this poem. I had to read it over a few times to capture my thoughts.... which was fun to do. But I really loved how the poem used "plant" words (i.e., roots, trunks, soil, leaves). It really described the feeling of the person in the poem. Looks like she had a refreshing day. It was very fun to read. thanks.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2008
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Well, I really loved this poem. I had to read it over a few times to capture my thoughts.... which was fun to do. But I really loved how the poem used "plant" words (i.e., roots, trunks, soil, leaves). It really described the feeling of the person in the poem. Looks like she had a refreshing day. It was very fun to read. thanks.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2008
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Thank you, okiboy, for capturing so well the meaning and hidden hints of a tree. Wonderful.
Comment from kassey
Such a fabulous message for women today, I wish I had a sixer, I am in just that mood at the moment and relate to every word. I particularly feel two lines sum me up at the moment
"Let stillness
court my hands"
What a perfect way to say you are going to do nothing, I just love it. The poem just ran smoothly through the verses and I loved reading it. Excellent Kay
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2008
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Such a fabulous message for women today, I wish I had a sixer, I am in just that mood at the moment and relate to every word. I particularly feel two lines sum me up at the moment
"Let stillness
court my hands"
What a perfect way to say you are going to do nothing, I just love it. The poem just ran smoothly through the verses and I loved reading it. Excellent Kay
Comment Written 13-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2008
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Thank you Kay for the great review and for letting me know your favorite phrase. I am working on a poem to my busy hand.
