Toxic Transference
A bit of free verse on negativity and wasted time106 total reviews
Comment from Seraphim Delphinium
What a wonderful message! Uplifting and perfectly executed. All too often people drown themselves in a teaspoon of water... Great point. Great poem. Seraph
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What a wonderful message! Uplifting and perfectly executed. All too often people drown themselves in a teaspoon of water... Great point. Great poem. Seraph
Comment Written 17-Aug-2009
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thank you
Comment from peggles
Hello.
I had to read this a few times before I clicked what your message was. However, once I had my brain in gear, I thought it was a very subtle use of words. A little too deep for me but well done
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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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Hello.
I had to read this a few times before I clicked what your message was. However, once I had my brain in gear, I thought it was a very subtle use of words. A little too deep for me but well done
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2009
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too deep, the message is complaining is a waste of time and thrild world problems are larger than ours stop complaining and search for solutions
Comment from L.lora
An unusual poem in FV style. Your message, while negative does come through clearly. I'm not sure how I feel about the poem for it envoked numerous types of feelings from this reader, perhaps it left me uncomfortable from the negativity aspect. Yes, one is either part of the solution or part of the problem. Thank you for the read. Lora
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An unusual poem in FV style. Your message, while negative does come through clearly. I'm not sure how I feel about the poem for it envoked numerous types of feelings from this reader, perhaps it left me uncomfortable from the negativity aspect. Yes, one is either part of the solution or part of the problem. Thank you for the read. Lora
Comment Written 17-Aug-2009
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thank
Comment from Leiroy Rant
I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM. VERY DEEP AND EXPLAINS THE WORLD TODAY. I ALSO SO THINK IF WE DWELL TO MUCH ON PROBLEMS THEY ONLY CAUSE MORE NEGATIVE OUTCOMES. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, I WANNA READ MORE.
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I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM. VERY DEEP AND EXPLAINS THE WORLD TODAY. I ALSO SO THINK IF WE DWELL TO MUCH ON PROBLEMS THEY ONLY CAUSE MORE NEGATIVE OUTCOMES. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, I WANNA READ MORE.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2009
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thanks so much my friend for the high praise
Comment from findingmyroom
Your message is critical, and I like that you put it forth with a minimum of fuss, just as you suggest action without words. Nice job.
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Your message is critical, and I like that you put it forth with a minimum of fuss, just as you suggest action without words. Nice job.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2009
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thanks so much
Comment from Aussie
I liked your poem because it speaks of the 'in your face' attitude and negative conversations about the world at large. Sure, we can't get away from it but we can choose to be positive about the blessings that we do have! Well done.
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I liked your poem because it speaks of the 'in your face' attitude and negative conversations about the world at large. Sure, we can't get away from it but we can choose to be positive about the blessings that we do have! Well done.
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thank you
Comment from Steven Bishop
Very nice. I liked the message, and you summed it up pretty well in the authors notes. I especially liked "blessings in need of counting". That's a very true statement. There's not shortage of negativity or complaining, but when you look at the big picture and compare it to history, things are actually the best they've ever been. Good show!
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Very nice. I liked the message, and you summed it up pretty well in the authors notes. I especially liked "blessings in need of counting". That's a very true statement. There's not shortage of negativity or complaining, but when you look at the big picture and compare it to history, things are actually the best they've ever been. Good show!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2009
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thank you
Comment from Shirley B
I loved your poem. You are so right. The best way to get out of the dumps is to help someone self out with a problem. I loved the flow of the poem. I loved the message of the poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Happy writing. Shirley
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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I loved your poem. You are so right. The best way to get out of the dumps is to help someone self out with a problem. I loved the flow of the poem. I loved the message of the poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Happy writing. Shirley
Comment Written 17-Aug-2009
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thank you
Comment from Psychoholic
Very nice piece, Earthwriter. I agree that dwelling on problems is a waste of a person's time. The only solution for any problem is to take action.
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Very nice piece, Earthwriter. I agree that dwelling on problems is a waste of a person's time. The only solution for any problem is to take action.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2009
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thank you
Comment from Readywriter52
I noticed the poem is a little on the down side. There are complaints, negative views, disease and homelessness. They can't be ignored. We need to stop complaining and do something.
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I noticed the poem is a little on the down side. There are complaints, negative views, disease and homelessness. They can't be ignored. We need to stop complaining and do something.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2009
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thank you
