Idiomatic Fanatic
More idioms than you can shake a stick at...59 total reviews
Comment from juliaSjames
I've often fantasized about writing just this kind of poem, or of writing a story in which the dialogue is pure cliche.
You brought my fantasy to life, Steve.
It is with deep satisfaction and immense pleasure that I award to you the highest rating that it is in my power to bestow.
"Arise, Sir Steve" ...
oops, got a little carried away there.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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I've often fantasized about writing just this kind of poem, or of writing a story in which the dialogue is pure cliche.
You brought my fantasy to life, Steve.
It is with deep satisfaction and immense pleasure that I award to you the highest rating that it is in my power to bestow.
"Arise, Sir Steve" ...
oops, got a little carried away there.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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At least you didn't whack my head off with the sword!
High praise indeed - thank you so much.
Steve
Comment from mrsmajor
This was quite a joy to read, you got so many in, and kept the rhyme there, without it sounding forced....
Your quatrains were so very well written, and gave the reader a chance to smile this early morning.
A wonderful exercise in writing.. I saw no spag here, the way you presented this piece was very good, I understood everything...and so, because I want to do so..I give this poem 6 stars, and wish you well in the contest..
Thanks for sharing..
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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This was quite a joy to read, you got so many in, and kept the rhyme there, without it sounding forced....
Your quatrains were so very well written, and gave the reader a chance to smile this early morning.
A wonderful exercise in writing.. I saw no spag here, the way you presented this piece was very good, I understood everything...and so, because I want to do so..I give this poem 6 stars, and wish you well in the contest..
Thanks for sharing..
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Thank you, Victoria.
I see from your profile that you are of a wonderful vintage - I am sure you know all these idioms and more...
Thanks, again for the generous rating - happy to make you smile.
Steve
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You are quite welcome! Indeed yes, I'm a old gal, and I do know some others, you poem was a good reminder and fun!
Enjoy the Holiday season!
Comment from Piggies Grandma
I enjoyed reading your poem very much kiwisteveh. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. I like the beginning as we have a poodle. My husband keeps saying that he was named well because that's all he does...lol.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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I enjoyed reading your poem very much kiwisteveh. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. I like the beginning as we have a poodle. My husband keeps saying that he was named well because that's all he does...lol.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Thank you. I appreciate your kind words.
Give the poodle a pat for me.
Steve
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Stev, I didn't read the rules but I'd say you researched your topic out beautifully. This one is clever and has great descriptive words. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Hi Stev, I didn't read the rules but I'd say you researched your topic out beautifully. This one is clever and has great descriptive words. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Thanks!
I think they just wanted a poem based on one idiom or quote so I'm a bit over the top as usual!
Steve
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a very will rhymes poem and the last line is the truth. You use more sayings that I could of thought of and mad stanzas that made sense that showed ironic humor.
Good luck and keep writing
Dragonpoet
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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This is a very will rhymes poem and the last line is the truth. You use more sayings that I could of thought of and mad stanzas that made sense that showed ironic humor.
Good luck and keep writing
Dragonpoet
Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Thank you for your kind words
Steve
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You're welcome Steve.
Joan
Comment from Denise S
Your imagination was really active when you were writeing this one. I liked it a lot. And you found just the right picture too. All the best in the contest
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Your imagination was really active when you were writeing this one. I liked it a lot. And you found just the right picture too. All the best in the contest
Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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And I reckon I could have easily gone on a few more stanzas...
Thank you.
Steve
Comment from Linda England Bonam
I really loved this poem alot! It had all those listed and all rhyming so well. I am just flat amazed that you pulled this off so cleverly and with such ease. It was such a pleasure to read. I am unsure of the contest rules, but this is a winner in my book!
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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I really loved this poem alot! It had all those listed and all rhyming so well. I am just flat amazed that you pulled this off so cleverly and with such ease. It was such a pleasure to read. I am unsure of the contest rules, but this is a winner in my book!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Thanks!
I think they just wanted a poem based on one idiom or quote so I'm a bit over the top as usual!
Steve
Comment from Chrisfiore
Hello kiwisteveh, This is a brilliant effort and yes, I am a fan of this type of poem. I am pleased to offer you 5 stars with this contest entry. I think you have a winner here and if I'm wrong, I'll be a monkey's uncle. ;) Chrisfiore
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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Hello kiwisteveh, This is a brilliant effort and yes, I am a fan of this type of poem. I am pleased to offer you 5 stars with this contest entry. I think you have a winner here and if I'm wrong, I'll be a monkey's uncle. ;) Chrisfiore
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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You might have to 'eat' your words - not sure if I'll get away with blatantly breaking the prompt wide open.
Steve
Comment from peggles
This is a fun verse
it made me smile
I enjoyed reading it very much
It is cleverly written and
exceptionally well presented
well done
it is always a pleasure to read your work
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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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This is a fun verse
it made me smile
I enjoyed reading it very much
It is cleverly written and
exceptionally well presented
well done
it is always a pleasure to read your work
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Thank you, peggles. It is my pleasure to raise a smile.
Steve