Comment from elgone

Excellent

How we pass through the day is a reflection of what we did yesterday and what was carried on into the present. Tomorrow carried our dreams but what we do today determines our agenda for tomorrow. That's what I gathered from your poetic message.

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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012

Hi Elgone. I cant thank you enough for your
great review and comment.
I am glad it makes sense to you. You gathered right.. Lol
My Regards

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Our ideals and desires fuel our days. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very smooth read. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012

Hi c-lucas. I cant thank you enough for your
great review and comment.
I am glad it makes sense to you.
My Regards

reply by c_lucas on 29-Apr-2012

YOu're welcome.

Comment from Elizabeth Daniels

Excellent

A very nice 5-7-5. And so true. We must always be striving towards our goals and dreams. Life gets pretty boring otherwise. Elizabeth Daniels.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012

Hi Elizabeth. I cant thank you enough for your
great review and comment.
I am glad it makes sense to you.
My Regards

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes very creative and thought provoking you have said so much in the limitations of the form a strong work well done regards Fuller

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012

Hi Fuller. I cant thank you enough for your
great review and comment.
I am glad it makes sense to you.
My Regards

Comment from Harlequin

Excellent

An optimistic poem that clearly shows that you have faith and a person who believe that there is light at the end of the tunnel. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012

Hi Petrarch. I cant thank you enough for your
great review and comment.
I am glad it makes sense to you.
My Regards

Comment from P1

Excellent

What drives me today?
It's the fueling yesterday,
Will make tomorrow.

such a lot captured within such few lines
fuelled and driven great choice of words
really enjoyed this piece

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012

Hi Paige. I cant thank you enough for your
great review and comment.
I am glad it makes sense to you.
My Regards

Comment from Chris Tee

Excellent

Your 5-7-5 poem is true to form and the message is well described in your author's notes the syllable count is also spot-on.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012

Hi Chris. I cant thank you enough for your great review and comment.
I am glad it makes sense to you.
My Regards

Comment from N.K. Wagner

Excellent

DaGirl, not only is your poetry lovely, but you should be writing essays as well. This has been very inspiring reading. :) Nancy

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012

Hi N.k. I cant thank you enough for your great review and comment.
I am glad it makes sense to you.
I also wish to be able to write more but working on the upgrade issue 'cause of my country payment limitations.
Thanks for your kind advice.
My Regards

Comment from KinaSalad

Exceptional

Hi Dagirl, I love your haiku, your words are miraculously written for me today. Your informative notes topped it of.Thank you very much for sharing

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012

Hi Kinasalad. I cant thank you enough for your 6 star review and comments!
I am truly glad it makes sense to you.
My Regards

Comment from oozer

Excellent

OOPs! Do dah! Do dah! I am so sorry to aware you to the nasty fact of weed in your plot, honey. Fueling happens
to no less than three syllables and dat is one too many
my dear. I am way to sleepy to help jus' now!

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012

Thanks alot for your encouragement and great review. I am truly glad that it makes sense to you. However, i noted what you observed and having an understanding that pronounciation of certain words are controversial amongst different tongues. I used standard oral english books (after i read your comment, just to be sure) and a talking dictionary and i am pretty sure it is a 2-syllable count but if you insist, please do let me know. I will confirm further.
My Regards
thanks!

reply by oozer on 29-Apr-2012

FU-EL properly has two syllables but in some American Dialects the word has one syllable. I would say
if you are happy with with it then
stick to your guns! Take care!