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To a son of God

Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "I am Providence ...!"
Metre ... Freeverse & Quatrain

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Comment from sibhus
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This is an interesting poem, and As i understand it providence is the ransom sarifice of Christ. Did religion actually buy providence, or has providence created religion? Either way this is a good poem that provokes thought and contemplation. Excellent work.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2012
    much obliged...
Comment from kra-z-ka-z
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WOW! Now, if I'm not mistaken, this is God/Jesus writing in the first person condemning the falseness that religion has used to blind.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2012
    check out donaldww's review and you will see who the first person is. You may be in for a little shock, but I love it anyway...
Comment from seren james
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Very enjoyable read. Providence as a metaphor for God is ideal. This is what we have every day. Your poem is a nice prayer to contemplate in our daily life. Unfortunately some are blessed with too much and some too little or nothing at all. How do we find the balance.?.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2012
    Check out review for christianspirit for my interpretation of what providence is and try donaldww's review to find out who I am?
Comment from the_tronic_orb
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I enjoyed your poem, but I'm a bit confused as to the 'religion bought' part. I'm not really sure how that fits with providence.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2012
    For providence in my understanding check out christianspirit review and read donalww's also and get back to me and I will explain religieon bought if it needs to be...
Comment from dmt1967
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This is a very good poem I like it very much about providence and remember me bit very nice with a tints of sadness thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2012
    mmmm...I would like it to be shouting and crying out...maybe I should have put it in caapitals...
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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I like the way this was
presented, and the beautiful
picture of the horse, Bicpen,

but
do I understand it? No!

Am I being nieve?

Margaret

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2012
    Yes you are...check out donaldww's review and get back to me ...
Comment from ramfire
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An interesting write that gets me to think about providence and how it affects my life. I like the way you start a few stanzas - with I, I am. Seems very creative.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2012
    He certainly was very creative, do you know who I am? check out review donaldww...
reply by ramfire on 14-Aug-2012
    I think He is "The Great I am" of the Bible.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2012
    WHO????...donaldww or ****** HITLER...!!!!
Comment from tango494
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Excellent and very creative poem. I loved how you chose to format it and your picture and color selection was perfect. Awesom job and thanks for sharing!!!!

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2012
    Excellent, much appreciated.
Comment from RaymondJohn
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Quite an interesting story. I wondered what Providence had to do with killing my children. Great graphic and a very provocative poem. Ray.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2012
    Read donaldww's review and christianspirit maybe they will enlighten...
Comment from Auroraboreal800
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I liked this dramatic well written poem. This is powerful and thought provoking with very scary biblical images.
The artwork is very beautiful.
GREAT JOB Bicpen!
:)

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2012
    Much obliged...