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Something's Amiss

A bizarre apocalyptic dream

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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I wouldn't even like of offer a guess, it does sound very foreboding, that much is for sure. I remember 'The Birds' it scared the life out of me the first time I saw it, so I can imagine what this dream did for you. You captured it well in your writing of it. Was it a pleasure or a warning for me to read? Don't think I will sleep well tonight. :) Sandra

 Comment Written 05-May-2014

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I liked this very much, it was dark and scary, "tar dipped feathers of ghastly black" this was a wonderful line, I loved your presentation with the animated pictures, great writing,
Andrew

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 Comment Written 05-May-2014

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My interpretation is you died and then came back to life, Dean. The only reason you did, is you got on the wrong bus to hell, instead of Heaven, so the horned driver through you off as you were too nice for his destination. :-)

I've given up trying to analyse my dreams, but they're usually bad, and so it's good they're soon forgotten.

Excellent read, my friend.

Best wishes, Ted

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 Comment Written 05-May-2014