Comment from Angel Debbie

Excellent

Remembering years ago having a boyfriend and possible meeting again many years later. It's funny men change alot over the years this write just happened to me, and funny for the life of me he changed so much in looks I didn't recognize him. 30 years later. But he recognized me. Funny hey.
Great write. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014

thanks for reading Angel just for fun

Comment from Rubylou

Exceptional

WOW, carefree days of summer,
This brings back so many memories. Much of them I can relate via you wonderful poem. And yes,
dream can come crushing down! YIKES!

Even though your poem was just for fun, it carries a strong message.
Rubylou

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014

thanks again for this

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

Funny how the emotions and memories of that first major crush linger so sharp and clear when we can hardly remember what happened yesterday. This poem describes how meaningful those memories are as we get older.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014

thank you for reading

Comment from colorfree

Excellent

A sweet poem, well written of first love. I only have one suggestion for you. It might be a matter of differing styles, but I want to help if I can. Thanks for sharing!

I would suggest changing "First kiss real awkward" to "Awkward first kiss" or at least change "real" to "really".

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014

thank you

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

I find this an interesting mix of free verse and rhymed verse. I did not look for deep patterns, I found it an easy pleasant read at normal speed.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014

thank you

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Your lovely poem brings back some very pleasant memories. I remember being surprised by a girl I did not even know liked me. I found as she suddenly and without warning kissed me and ran inside her house. I was at her house early the next day, eager to experience this wonderful new thing. What a summer!

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014

thanks nomi

Comment from Kausar_Javeria

Excellent

Hello there~!
Wow... This is really well written. At first, i read it like a really sweet poem, then the last few lines changed everything.
Great Job!

JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)

(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014

thank you jazak

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Oh I love the knights in white satin.....the Moody Blues..............
What a poignant poem of first love.....
Well done......................
God bless

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014

thank you

Comment from yougogencoco

Excellent

I really liked how this poem told a story. I really felt as if I were the person recalling my first love. Very powerful.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014

thank you

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

We all have those memories. Sometimes we wonder what became of friends or loves of the past.
Some rhymed couplets with lots of emotion
a pleasant read

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014

thank you