Life, Love, and Other Disasters
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Comment from tfawcus
Splendid use of the vernacular to put Death in his place. One has to speak to him sharply on occasion to keep him at bay. He has a way of creeping into poems and pictures - memento mori and all that...
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Splendid use of the vernacular to put Death in his place. One has to speak to him sharply on occasion to keep him at bay. He has a way of creeping into poems and pictures - memento mori and all that...
Comment Written 05-Jan-2015
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Thanks, Tony.
he is a bit of a pervasive character, isn't he" The star of many Terry Pratchett novels and a wonderful narrator of one of my favourites, 'The Book Thief'
Steve
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh this is cute. I expected something else when I saw the picture but this is pulled together nicely.
Love the emotion and determination.
Nicely done
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Oh this is cute. I expected something else when I saw the picture but this is pulled together nicely.
Love the emotion and determination.
Nicely done
Comment Written 05-Jan-2015
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Thanks, Barb.
Steve
Comment from kiwijenny
Yeah you tell him Steve...are you ok?
Ten foot knife...wow a scythe I used one once....he should modernize ...I mean the constant hacking with that thing...you told him to scoot...Scoot ?! What on a mo ped.....Steve you were too gentile...SCOOT what about vaporize back..or sizzle back no this is death we doff our cap in deference and pay the piper
God bless
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Yeah you tell him Steve...are you ok?
Ten foot knife...wow a scythe I used one once....he should modernize ...I mean the constant hacking with that thing...you told him to scoot...Scoot ?! What on a mo ped.....Steve you were too gentile...SCOOT what about vaporize back..or sizzle back no this is death we doff our cap in deference and pay the piper
God bless
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2015
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Thanks, Jenny - yes, I'm fine - not really contemplating death at my doorstep.
Steve
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Yay I wonder how we scoot from him...i m using digestive enzymes and making kefir from unpasteurized goats milk to keep him at bay:o) scoot but my kids mock me oh well I will be an old coot still telling death to scoot
Comment from patcelaw
interesting poem however I am not sure we will have a lot of power to stop death when it comes for us. I really would not want to do anything to change it for me. I have lived a long life and am getting tired, but I am ready to go to my Heavenly home that has been promised to me. Blessings, patricia
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interesting poem however I am not sure we will have a lot of power to stop death when it comes for us. I really would not want to do anything to change it for me. I have lived a long life and am getting tired, but I am ready to go to my Heavenly home that has been promised to me. Blessings, patricia
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2015
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Thanks, Patricia.
This is more a suggestion of not giving up on life too easily.
Steve
