Short Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Mistaken Identity"A book of a mixture of stories
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Comment from ladybird
I like this one. The underdog - well, girl in this case - came out on top.If that was a real life situation I would have loved to have seen Susan's face, lol.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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I like this one. The underdog - well, girl in this case - came out on top.If that was a real life situation I would have loved to have seen Susan's face, lol.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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ladybird,
I think it was a case of "day dreaming" that went to far...by accident...Susan never intended it to go and Mandy just thought she finished another of Susan's jobs. Thanks for the review..Smiles, Carol
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You're welcome.
Comment from eliz100
This is a cute, well-written story. I enjoyed reading it. Sometimes story lines are familiar but the good writer can make them fresh, which is what you did.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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This is a cute, well-written story. I enjoyed reading it. Sometimes story lines are familiar but the good writer can make them fresh, which is what you did.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Eliz,
I am so thrilled you enjoyed my silly reverse Cinderella...Thanks so much. Carol
Comment from Trybuck
Another boy gets girl story, or is that girl gets boy story, well... somebody's getting somebody story, I think...
:) Just kidding with you :) Another great story from you and I hope it does well for you in the contest, Buck
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Another boy gets girl story, or is that girl gets boy story, well... somebody's getting somebody story, I think...
:) Just kidding with you :) Another great story from you and I hope it does well for you in the contest, Buck
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Buck,
Mandy just thought she was finishing another of Susan's jobs and Susan was just daydreaming maybe a bit too far...never intending for the message to go anywhere...Thanks for the generous review. Carol
Comment from Belinda
Judging by her character, Mandy would never write such a letter, would she? This misunderstanding is hilarious, Carol, is it also one of your experiences? Interesting entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Judging by her character, Mandy would never write such a letter, would she? This misunderstanding is hilarious, Carol, is it also one of your experiences? Interesting entry for the contest.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Belinda,
Not mine...but someone's. Glad you enjoyed the story...Susan carried her daydreaming too far and Mandy just finished the job! Smiles, Carol
Comment from patmedium
What a chuckle you have given me, Carol... I feel really cheerful now. You are very clever with your ideas. Thankyou for your fertile mind. Pat.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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What a chuckle you have given me, Carol... I feel really cheerful now. You are very clever with your ideas. Thankyou for your fertile mind. Pat.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Pat,
You are most welcome my dear friend...I appreciate the usage of fertile...others might call me full of messy you know what..LOL Thanks fo r the great review. Smiles, Carol
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'Twas a pleasure to read. Pat.
Comment from samandlancelot
I liked your turn of events. I like the way Mandy took responsibility for her mistake, and it turned out or her good. Good contender for the contest.
Patricia
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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I liked your turn of events. I like the way Mandy took responsibility for her mistake, and it turned out or her good. Good contender for the contest.
Patricia
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Patricia,
Funny though that the boss just assumed she sent it so she wrote it! Thanks for the great review. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Mariea
It would be great if all mistaken identities could turn out this well. Characters constant throughout. No typo or punctuation glitches apparent. Good luck in the contest.
Regards Mia
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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It would be great if all mistaken identities could turn out this well. Characters constant throughout. No typo or punctuation glitches apparent. Good luck in the contest.
Regards Mia
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Mia,
Thanks so much for the wonderful review. I appreciate it very much. Smiles, Carol
Comment from misscookie
you did it again a beauitful story , I love your stories they are mostly refreshing to read (smile )
jus joking all your stories are refreshing to read.
this is a good write.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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you did it again a beauitful story , I love your stories they are mostly refreshing to read (smile )
jus joking all your stories are refreshing to read.
this is a good write.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Cookie,
Good morning, sweet friend. Thank you enjoyed this one. Smiles, Carol
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your welcome. take casre
Comment from Amanda Dcosta
LOL.... good one!
It is actually a very simple story line, but you have done a great job at description and simple dialogue. I was kinda expecting Jack to ask Mandy out to dinner... but the email part surprised me, esp with the content. :)
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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LOL.... good one!
It is actually a very simple story line, but you have done a great job at description and simple dialogue. I was kinda expecting Jack to ask Mandy out to dinner... but the email part surprised me, esp with the content. :)
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Angeladi,
A case of Susan's day dreamings benefiting someone else...Maybe! Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from missy98writer
Carol,
Your on a roll as of late with your stories. Excellent with a touch of treachery. Jack thought the letter was from Mandy and not the catty Susan. I loved the ending when Jack asked Mandy to dinner. I could see the stunned look on Susan's face. That's what she gets. I love Mandy's last line:
Mandy smiled, "We were discussing mistaken identities."
Excellent short story about the letter. I bet this one wins the writing prompt. Brilliant dialogue and descriptive scheme. I always enjoy reading your stories.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Carol,
Your on a roll as of late with your stories. Excellent with a touch of treachery. Jack thought the letter was from Mandy and not the catty Susan. I loved the ending when Jack asked Mandy to dinner. I could see the stunned look on Susan's face. That's what she gets. I love Mandy's last line:
Mandy smiled, "We were discussing mistaken identities."
Excellent short story about the letter. I bet this one wins the writing prompt. Brilliant dialogue and descriptive scheme. I always enjoy reading your stories.
Melissa.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Melissa,
You have brightened my morning as usual...Thank you so much for the wonderful review...Yes, the haughty Susan lost her chance with the boss for sure! Smiles, Carol