Ode to Child's Pose
Discovering Yoga95 total reviews
Comment from InHisownwrite
The comparisons and imagery are great...(serene escape to connect)(in distinct folds and layers of plentitude)
(as I breathe out my internal race)love the imagery of the 5th verse..(emerges into a magnificent fresh healed vase)
Love it.. Bryan
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2010
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The comparisons and imagery are great...(serene escape to connect)(in distinct folds and layers of plentitude)
(as I breathe out my internal race)love the imagery of the 5th verse..(emerges into a magnificent fresh healed vase)
Love it.. Bryan
Comment Written 09-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2010
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Thank you Bryan for quoting the phrases that you liked the best. It means a lot to me.
Comment from AnetteAurora
thank you so much for this poem because you describe so well why I should get my act together and start doing my yoga. i will start tomorrow!!! .0)
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2010
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thank you so much for this poem because you describe so well why I should get my act together and start doing my yoga. i will start tomorrow!!! .0)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2010
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Ok! Thank you so much for the fun review!
Comment from koyoga
Namaste! How lovely to see a tribute
to such a wonderful yoga posture. A
seemingly simple pose that offers such
amazing benefits!! I love this. Thanks
so much for posting.
Om Shanti!!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2010
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Namaste! How lovely to see a tribute
to such a wonderful yoga posture. A
seemingly simple pose that offers such
amazing benefits!! I love this. Thanks
so much for posting.
Om Shanti!!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2010
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Namaste, fellow yogi! It's great to get to know you! Child's Pose is my friend!
Comment from c_lucas
This is a well written poem with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. The exercise looks simple, but it's not for me. Good luck in your contest.
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This is a well written poem with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. The exercise looks simple, but it's not for me. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2010
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Thank you so much in reviewing this work.
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You're welcome, Amada. Charlie
Comment from Charlene0513
To amanda,
A very surreal poem that twinges on the goodness that yoga can bring to the body.
Hopefully dispelling any chance of depression and fractures of the body on a normal day.
Great rhythm and a fine presentation to the subject.
Charlene
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To amanda,
A very surreal poem that twinges on the goodness that yoga can bring to the body.
Hopefully dispelling any chance of depression and fractures of the body on a normal day.
Great rhythm and a fine presentation to the subject.
Charlene
Comment Written 09-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2010
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Thank you Charlene for commenting in this work. Much appreciated!
Comment from Kashif Ali Abbas
I like your theme, you used the words well. The worthy theme/ode to child's pose/some kinda yoga and the connection to spiritual rise is driven well.
Bets of luck
K
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2010
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I like your theme, you used the words well. The worthy theme/ode to child's pose/some kinda yoga and the connection to spiritual rise is driven well.
Bets of luck
K
Comment Written 09-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2010
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Thank you K!
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi amada,
You used the required words with ease, they are not forced but fit into the lines of this poem well. You wrote this well. The theme and word choices are excellent. Good luck in the contest...blessings....chey
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2010
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Hi amada,
You used the required words with ease, they are not forced but fit into the lines of this poem well. You wrote this well. The theme and word choices are excellent. Good luck in the contest...blessings....chey
Comment Written 09-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2010
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Thank you chey for reading and commenting in this work.
Comment from minopavlic
Amada, I have never attempted yogo as a form of relaxation, or considered it a spiritual journey of sorts. You atistically brings its practice o life, and I love your brief history given.
Thank you for sharing
Mino
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Amada, I have never attempted yogo as a form of relaxation, or considered it a spiritual journey of sorts. You atistically brings its practice o life, and I love your brief history given.
Thank you for sharing
Mino
Comment Written 09-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2010
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Thank you Mino. This is a very honest and at the same time honoring review.
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Sorry for my mistakes, I have a frustrating, sticking keyboard. Your welcome Amada
Comment from Judian James
Absolutely brilliant Amada, and I like so many others by Friday, have no sixers left. Every line in every verse is superb!! This is the best I have read for this contest.
A smart, smooth, clever, flowing piece. Just superb!!
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Absolutely brilliant Amada, and I like so many others by Friday, have no sixers left. Every line in every verse is superb!! This is the best I have read for this contest.
A smart, smooth, clever, flowing piece. Just superb!!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2010
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Thank you for the brilliant review. I'm thankful.
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I am so, so sorry I have no sixes for you. Just a superb piece of writing. It should be printed as a poster and hung in Yoga Studios everywhere!
Comment from skye
Wonderful use of the words required, making yoga attractive to those of us who cannot get into one of those poses.
Your words are peaceful, well written.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2010
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Wonderful use of the words required, making yoga attractive to those of us who cannot get into one of those poses.
Your words are peaceful, well written.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2010
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Thank you skye for reading and reviewing this work.
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Thank you skye for reading and reviewing this work.