Jerry Jing-Jang Comes to Town
A cowboy tale74 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, cindy, you did a great job writing this story in poetry form about the cowboy that did the sheriff's job and took care of the outlaws. i enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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this is very well written, cindy, you did a great job writing this story in poetry form about the cowboy that did the sheriff's job and took care of the outlaws. i enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest
Comment Written 24-May-2012
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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I'm glad you enjoyed my story poem. Thanks for the review and the good wishes for the contest.
Comment from Cobalt Blue
It's pretty cool that your father told you all the stories which made such a big impression on you that you retell them in poetic form years later. You tell a good story in verse. The rhymes are delightful! I don't know what the horse and rider are looking at in the picture but the horse seems like he wants to get out of there!
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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It's pretty cool that your father told you all the stories which made such a big impression on you that you retell them in poetic form years later. You tell a good story in verse. The rhymes are delightful! I don't know what the horse and rider are looking at in the picture but the horse seems like he wants to get out of there!
Comment Written 24-May-2012
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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The stories aren't exactly as he told them then. I don't remember them that well and neither does he, so I had to make a lot of it up myself. I'm glad you enjoyed it. The picture brought to mind the cowboy riding off into the sunset. Maybe the horse has had enough! Thanks for the five stars.
Comment from Kelleigh
That's so cute. Don't we all believe every tall tale that our father's tell us, lol...I'm still not sure which of my father's fishing tales are true...and theyonly get crazier the older he gets, lol...Great little poetic story. :)
~Kelleigh
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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That's so cute. Don't we all believe every tall tale that our father's tell us, lol...I'm still not sure which of my father's fishing tales are true...and theyonly get crazier the older he gets, lol...Great little poetic story. :)
~Kelleigh
Comment Written 24-May-2012
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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You should write some of his fish tales! I'm sure he'd love it. I'm glad you liked my story poem. Thanks for this great review.
Comment from Jane Johnson
Very very cute story verse. Nice rhyming and it seemed to flow quite smoothly. Nice artwork you chose. Thanks for writing and sharing.
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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Very very cute story verse. Nice rhyming and it seemed to flow quite smoothly. Nice artwork you chose. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Comment Written 24-May-2012
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from moosegal
Very clever and very creative. I love the hero's name - has a nice ring to it and it's memorable. You did your dad proud! Fabulous images and descriptions. Tiny correction would be "brash and bold, they learned late". Great job!
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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Very clever and very creative. I love the hero's name - has a nice ring to it and it's memorable. You did your dad proud! Fabulous images and descriptions. Tiny correction would be "brash and bold, they learned
Comment Written 24-May-2012
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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His real name is Gerry. I changed the first letter so kids could sound it out. The Jing-Jang part he made up himself. I'm glad you liked the story poem. Thanks for this great review.
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Oops. The correction didn't come through. TOO late, not to. Otherwise, great job.
Comment from Chris Tee
Cindy your poem "Jerry Jing-Jang Comes to Town" is an absolute jewel of a story within a poem and it intrigued me. Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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Cindy your poem "Jerry Jing-Jang Comes to Town" is an absolute jewel of a story within a poem and it intrigued me. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-May-2012
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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Thanks for the review and the good wishes for the contest. I'm so glad you liked my story poem.
Comment from Lucyliv
Very well written. Has great rythem! I love the story that went along with the poem! It was defiantly easy to visualize and hold the readers attention! Very good job!
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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Very well written. Has great rythem! I love the story that went along with the poem! It was defiantly easy to visualize and hold the readers attention! Very good job!
Comment Written 24-May-2012
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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I'm so glad you enjoyed my cowboy poem. Thanks for this great review.
Comment from Maria C.
This is a very enjoyable story poem with a good plot and ending. Well written with plenty of detail. Good rhyming couplets and picture. Good 'j' alliteration in Jerry Jing-Jang
Maria C.
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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This is a very enjoyable story poem with a good plot and ending. Well written with plenty of detail. Good rhyming couplets and picture. Good 'j' alliteration in Jerry Jing-Jang
Maria C.
Comment Written 24-May-2012
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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His real name is Gerry, but since some of the stories are for kids, I made it easier for them to sound out. Of course his stories are fantasy, but when I was six I totally believed him. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from jaeladarling
Yee-haw! A rootin' tootin', good ol' cowboy tale! I LOVE this! What a great story and a wonderful way to tell it. Do you have more? I sure hope so. I'd love to read them. :) Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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Yee-haw! A rootin' tootin', good ol' cowboy tale! I LOVE this! What a great story and a wonderful way to tell it. Do you have more? I sure hope so. I'd love to read them. :) Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 24-May-2012
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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Check out 'Jerry Jing-Jang and the Cattle Rustlers' in my portfolio. I'm so glad you like it. Thanks for this rootin' tootin' review.
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Oh, LOL, I meant are you going to *write* more! I'm certainly going to have a look at your portfolio! :)
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I do plan to write more.
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Hooray! :)
Comment from micci
Great poem, great story, I use to watch all those cowboy movies my mother use to put them on for me the picture suited your poem well
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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Great poem, great story, I use to watch all those cowboy movies my mother use to put them on for me the picture suited your poem well
Comment Written 23-May-2012
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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It's loosely based on my Dad's stories. I can't remember them too well and neither can he, so I made most of it up myself. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. Thanks for this great review.
