To a son of God
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Babylon The Whore!"Metre ... Freeverse & Quatrain
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Comment from Cumbrianlass
A pretty powerful write, my friend. Very dramatic,extremely intense. I'm beginning to understand the diversity of your writing and talent. Impressive.
Av
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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A pretty powerful write, my friend. Very dramatic,extremely intense. I'm beginning to understand the diversity of your writing and talent. Impressive.
Av
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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Thanks Avril much appreciated.
Comment from TammyGail
"Babylon the Great, the Mother of Prostitutes and Abominations of the Earth" and of course the Whore is associated with the Antichrist and the Beast of Revelation..
B... if I were retarded I would wrack your sack for you ... I gather you either read my poem about Babylon or my bluebird - either way it was a brilliant verse sprinkled in metaphors..
and if someone says something stupid for lack of understanding I gather you will stand up for me - you damn well better B.. you know the level of intellect on this site I will not fancy laughing and being called a whore out of its metaphorical context -
excellent write B... lol the next ones for you pal
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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"Babylon the Great, the Mother of Prostitutes and Abominations of the Earth" and of course the Whore is associated with the Antichrist and the Beast of Revelation..
B... if I were retarded I would wrack your sack for you ... I gather you either read my poem about Babylon or my bluebird - either way it was a brilliant verse sprinkled in metaphors..
and if someone says something stupid for lack of understanding I gather you will stand up for me - you damn well better B.. you know the level of intellect on this site I will not fancy laughing and being called a whore out of its metaphorical context -
excellent write B... lol the next ones for you pal
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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Like I said a long time ago T you can call me a retard anytime...I got your back any day...and you can wrack my sack anytime so long as M dosent mind.
Look forward to it...
Comment from Meta~Mark
Straight to.the top with Babylon the whore a very interesting and provocative emotional analogy with god at the forefront and biblical references aplenty, excellent and almost like that Charles b.. , wow
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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Straight to.the top with Babylon the whore a very interesting and provocative emotional analogy with god at the forefront and biblical references aplenty, excellent and almost like that Charles b.. , wow
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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Hey M...forgive I'm not much of a reader but whos charles b...
Comment from donaldww
This is a hot poem. Especially the peachy picture of a flaming hooker to match the red background. Various mythological characters from the Bible are referenced, and the poem ends with this charming refrain:
Woe, to Babylon: Babylon the whore...!
Out with the Bic, in with the new Mont Blanc.
Beelzebub would most certainly approve!
DW
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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This is a hot poem. Especially the peachy picture of a flaming hooker to match the red background. Various mythological characters from the Bible are referenced, and the poem ends with this charming refrain:
Woe, to Babylon: Babylon the whore...!
Out with the Bic, in with the new Mont Blanc.
Beelzebub would most certainly approve!
DW
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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I really dont know if he would to be honest with you...much appreciate.
Comment from hari anand
Babylon the whore , an excellent poetry...and so original in it's content...apt picture...I like those repetitive lines tooo...
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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Babylon the whore , an excellent poetry...and so original in it's content...apt picture...I like those repetitive lines tooo...
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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Thanks.
Comment from misscookie
This is a very deep poerm
with a message within it
I like how you express the emotions of what a whore is goinf through.
I hope I'm reading your poem right.
thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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This is a very deep poerm
with a message within it
I like how you express the emotions of what a whore is goinf through.
I hope I'm reading your poem right.
thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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sort of...
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tell me please what I miss please I want to know. so I can understand your write.
Thank you very much.
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Well, The whore is a power of the world that has lived in opposition to the Spirit of God and his holiness.
The references to her cring out is what she does to people according to Gods truth.
She is an opium for the masses, where her doctrines and ritualistic practices are portrayed as true religion but in fact are a dead hoax.
She is an old power refered to as Bal, then Baal, then Baalim: This is her name as it progresses through the generations, different in name but the same old power or whore.
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Thank you very much for explainig it to mw....Wow this is very deep.
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Anytime...
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, bicpen, you did a great job writing this poem about babylon and her fall, who sold herself like a prostitute to the devil. isn't it supposed to be zion or is sion a different spelling?
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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this is very well written, bicpen, you did a great job writing this poem about babylon and her fall, who sold herself like a prostitute to the devil. isn't it supposed to be zion or is sion a different spelling?
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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sion just a different spelling I think...!
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
i'm no great fan of this bible bonking blather
(and i don't mean that unkindly), and this
hasn't turned me head on that score, Bic,
but, from a poetic point, though the tense
see-saws, it's well penned and presented.
thank you for sharing. regards, eph.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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i'm no great fan of this bible bonking blather
(and i don't mean that unkindly), and this
hasn't turned me head on that score, Bic,
but, from a poetic point, though the tense
see-saws, it's well penned and presented.
thank you for sharing. regards, eph.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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Thanks uncle eph...much appreciate.
Comment from whispersofthesoul
Hiya,
This is a great piece of writing, I had to read it a few times before I got it properly-and obviously I did :) I love the dark elements going on here and the imagery you use around this helps. Although in your notes you have mentioned the repition, i have to tell you it works really well and gets the point across easily.
Just a note the presentation you have chosen especially the image gives your poem extre depth, it is like an unwritten line which the reader reads straight away.
Well done I enjoyed reading this xx
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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Hiya,
This is a great piece of writing, I had to read it a few times before I got it properly-and obviously I did :) I love the dark elements going on here and the imagery you use around this helps. Although in your notes you have mentioned the repition, i have to tell you it works really well and gets the point across easily.
Just a note the presentation you have chosen especially the image gives your poem extre depth, it is like an unwritten line which the reader reads straight away.
Well done I enjoyed reading this xx
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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Many thanks...(xxx)
Comment from God's Writer
An excellent write my friend. It is nice when someone else stands up for the truth and against evil. I find this poem to be professionally written, thought out and executed. A wonderful treat to read this morning. I thank you for the privilege.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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An excellent write my friend. It is nice when someone else stands up for the truth and against evil. I find this poem to be professionally written, thought out and executed. A wonderful treat to read this morning. I thank you for the privilege.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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Thanks HP.
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You are welcome. It was a grand poem.
