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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Revival of the Red"5/7/5 poems
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Comment from Eigle Rull
This poem is very short, but it is also complete in its words and thoughts. You chose your subject, and homed in on it very well. It was very interesting.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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This poem is very short, but it is also complete in its words and thoughts. You chose your subject, and homed in on it very well. It was very interesting.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)
Comment from SteveY
Ok nicely done, but I already see that many others thought so too. Love the picture that goes with this. I think it help me to understand what you were saying in this one.
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Ok nicely done, but I already see that many others thought so too. Love the picture that goes with this. I think it help me to understand what you were saying in this one.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Hehe...this is totally in your 'hate' list i guess.
But thanks for the generous review.
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
My this is something to get your teeth in to! Love the alliteration as it give a great flow, the picture is perfect for the poem, blood suckers having a night party at the expense of your life's blood... blood crave, red rave! Good stuff!
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My this is something to get your teeth in to! Love the alliteration as it give a great flow, the picture is perfect for the poem, blood suckers having a night party at the expense of your life's blood... blood crave, red rave! Good stuff!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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That's an amazing review!!
I am glad you liked it so much.i appreciate your comments and stars.thanks a lot:-)
Comment from DanielEkine
Fascinating your work is. I am intrigued at the captivation of the cold blooded vampire. As a fan of horror and vampires, I am definitely glad with this. Thank you for your poem. A fresh work have seen today.
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Fascinating your work is. I am intrigued at the captivation of the cold blooded vampire. As a fan of horror and vampires, I am definitely glad with this. Thank you for your poem. A fresh work have seen today.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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You are supposed to state 'suggestion' if you give you a four.else you aren't a 'fair reviewer'.
Comment from latonyalatrice1
I had to read your poem three times. The first time I read it fast because I want to view the pic. (very nice pic) The second time I read it I had to stop and look up luminal. Once I read it the third time I seen its power. Great job!
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I had to read your poem three times. The first time I read it fast because I want to view the pic. (very nice pic) The second time I read it I had to stop and look up luminal. Once I read it the third time I seen its power. Great job!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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I am so happy that you liked it.yes 'luminal' is a tricky word here.Thanks for your lovely words and excellent review:-)
Comment from turtledove
Anupam Sharma, interesting and thought-provoking! You are very talented. Conveying many ideas with little words. Hope you favour well in the contest:) The image is perfect for your words as well! turtledove
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Anupam Sharma, interesting and thought-provoking! You are very talented. Conveying many ideas with little words. Hope you favour well in the contest:) The image is perfect for your words as well! turtledove
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Your words are very encouraging.they mean a lot.thanks for the generous rating:-)
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You're Welcome! td:)
Comment from Gloria ....
Hey Anapum pretty interesting 5/7/5 about those pesky vampires. They really do lurch like lusty leeches eh? Nice job on the alliteration and the Ls and Rs. Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013
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Hey Anapum pretty interesting 5/7/5 about those pesky vampires. They really do lurch like lusty leeches eh? Nice job on the alliteration and the Ls and Rs. Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 13-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013
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I am glad you liked it.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)
Comment from DALLAS01
I really like the strong visual impact of this poem. Both in its verse and in the red font on black background. Great job with meaningful alliteration.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013
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I really like the strong visual impact of this poem. Both in its verse and in the red font on black background. Great job with meaningful alliteration.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)
Comment from Bryon1248
An interesting 5-7-5 write... The opening two lines written using only words starting with L was very we composed to keep to the meaning and structure
Very enjoyable
Bryon
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An interesting 5-7-5 write... The opening two lines written using only words starting with L was very we composed to keep to the meaning and structure
Very enjoyable
Bryon
Comment Written 13-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)
Comment from cephira
A great entry for the 5-7-5 contest. I really enjoyed the alliteration and the theme. The flow was also quick and intense. Nicely done. Congrats on the ribbon and seal.
Cephira
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013
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A great entry for the 5-7-5 contest. I really enjoyed the alliteration and the theme. The flow was also quick and intense. Nicely done. Congrats on the ribbon and seal.
Cephira
Comment Written 13-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013
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I am glad you liked it.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)