Steve's Poems for Kids
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Moonshine"A collection of my children's poems
80 total reviews
Comment from JeanneHP
That was the best poem that made no sense I have ever read. I worried for awhile, because it was so well done, I was beginning to get it. I loved it! :=)
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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That was the best poem that made no sense I have ever read. I worried for awhile, because it was so well done, I was beginning to get it. I loved it! :=)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Thanks, Jeanne.
I appreciate the review and the six stars.
Steve
Comment from boxergirl
I love your funny nonsense poem! The couplet rhymes give it the appropriate rhythm and the alliteration of the w's is nice as well. My favorite part are the names of all the characters as well as them eating moon bacon,etc. I smiled the whole time! Good job and good luck!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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I love your funny nonsense poem! The couplet rhymes give it the appropriate rhythm and the alliteration of the w's is nice as well. My favorite part are the names of all the characters as well as them eating moon bacon,etc. I smiled the whole time! Good job and good luck!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Thanks, BG!
Steve
Comment from harmony13
An excellent humorous poem! The reader found this poem to be delightful and a flowing read. The author was creative and descriptive in writing this poem. The author was able to create a visual scene in the reader's mind. The artwork and color scheme were perfect and enhanced the read.
Thank you, harmony13
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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An excellent humorous poem! The reader found this poem to be delightful and a flowing read. The author was creative and descriptive in writing this poem. The author was able to create a visual scene in the reader's mind. The artwork and color scheme were perfect and enhanced the read.
Thank you, harmony13
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Thanks for the great review.
Steve
Comment from eafournier
You have succeeded in writing a funny, nonsense poem. You have assembled quite a cast of characters and created some amusing scenarios. Great job!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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You have succeeded in writing a funny, nonsense poem. You have assembled quite a cast of characters and created some amusing scenarios. Great job!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Thank you!
Steve
Comment from weemick1960
I needed a bit of a giggle this evening and this write is it, most definitely. I loved the flow through this piece. The fun romped along from the beginning to the end, the words just tripping off the tongue as I spoke it aloud. The rhythm kept going all the way through, a brilliant nonsense poem. Now I'll get back and read it again....MIKE.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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I needed a bit of a giggle this evening and this write is it, most definitely. I loved the flow through this piece. The fun romped along from the beginning to the end, the words just tripping off the tongue as I spoke it aloud. The rhythm kept going all the way through, a brilliant nonsense poem. Now I'll get back and read it again....MIKE.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Mike, thanks for the great review and the kind comments.
Steve
Comment from justmarly
This is a good poem and funny. I enjoyed reading it. So many want to go to the moon. Not me. They waste so much money. I like the characters in your poem. I had to laugh. THank you for sharing it. JM
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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This is a good poem and funny. I enjoyed reading it. So many want to go to the moon. Not me. They waste so much money. I like the characters in your poem. I had to laugh. THank you for sharing it. JM
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Thank you!
Steve
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welcome! JM
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Well, it's a six if I ever saw one. What a wonderful nonsense poem. You get my six for today. I love it. Poem of the month, it is so cool! Pure nonsense. Nancy
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Well, it's a six if I ever saw one. What a wonderful nonsense poem. You get my six for today. I love it. Poem of the month, it is so cool! Pure nonsense. Nancy
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Nancy thanks for reviewing and the six stars!
Steve
Comment from Nuad1
This read like the "Great Pumpkin of Fall" poems! I liked it very much. Most especially the (happy) ending was a fun, fun line to read out loud! Too often poets address the stark . . the real; neat to read something that is light; airy and makes weird sense!!!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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This read like the "Great Pumpkin of Fall" poems! I liked it very much. Most especially the (happy) ending was a fun, fun line to read out loud! Too often poets address the stark . . the real; neat to read something that is light; airy and makes weird sense!!!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Thanks for the great review!
Steve
Comment from Charlene0513
A lovely story that builds your momentum as you capture each of their personalities by trying to buy in for each one's affections; thinking that one was better than the other.
Quite entertaining to say the least.
Charlene
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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A lovely story that builds your momentum as you capture each of their personalities by trying to buy in for each one's affections; thinking that one was better than the other.
Quite entertaining to say the least.
Charlene
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Thanks, Charlene!
Steve
Comment from Jackarrie
this is a very good entry to the nonsense poetry contst
Wow-Wow and Grizzly and Grumpy and Fat
All lived on the moon in a wee council flat,
With a moon-dog, an alien, Grumpy's old mother,
A whatchamacallit, a something-or-other
A wizard, a warlock, a pirate or two
And a wrinkled old warthog escaped from the zoo.
Well done good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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this is a very good entry to the nonsense poetry contst
Wow-Wow and Grizzly and Grumpy and Fat
All lived on the moon in a wee council flat,
With a moon-dog, an alien, Grumpy's old mother,
A whatchamacallit, a something-or-other
A wizard, a warlock, a pirate or two
And a wrinkled old warthog escaped from the zoo.
Well done good luck in the contest
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Thank you!
Steve