Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "The Dying Art"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Alan K Pease
A lot of truths tendered in prose. Truly we expect the most in life, but things are more complex rendering relationships that may fall less than our expectations. Then there our own failures.
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A lot of truths tendered in prose. Truly we expect the most in life, but things are more complex rendering relationships that may fall less than our expectations. Then there our own failures.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
Comment from godlucifer
life is like a memory it passes and goes. sometime remembering is sad and it depresses. life want us to remember the good moments but the memory is the sad moments of life. your poem is deep with thoughts n wisdom and its always amuse to read about wisdom. i enjoyed n reading your poem. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
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life is like a memory it passes and goes. sometime remembering is sad and it depresses. life want us to remember the good moments but the memory is the sad moments of life. your poem is deep with thoughts n wisdom and its always amuse to read about wisdom. i enjoyed n reading your poem. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
Comment from Angel Debbie
Perfect train of thoughts here! Not much more one can really say but how true it is. Life is so full of Drama that when we don't have it in our life we sometimes wonder what is wrong. Good friends and Family cures that sometimes. Great write thank You for sharing.
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Perfect train of thoughts here! Not much more one can really say but how true it is. Life is so full of Drama that when we don't have it in our life we sometimes wonder what is wrong. Good friends and Family cures that sometimes. Great write thank You for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
Comment from Auroraboreal800
Love the deep message in this piece. I think
life is a journey with many lessons. Trust and compassion are among them. There is always chance to learn and be better...
GREAT job friend!
:)
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Love the deep message in this piece. I think
life is a journey with many lessons. Trust and compassion are among them. There is always chance to learn and be better...
GREAT job friend!
:)
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
Comment from GregoryCody
Ooh very very strong. This is almost stream of consciousness prose poetry yes? It has a very sullen but understanding, embracing, tone. Very powerful. Nicely done.
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Ooh very very strong. This is almost stream of consciousness prose poetry yes? It has a very sullen but understanding, embracing, tone. Very powerful. Nicely done.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
Comment from Jay Squires
Hey, I like this! You sum up living with integrity, wisdom and meaning in one paragraph (the poetic form leaves me a little baffled, but that's probably me). Thank you, GW, for sharing your wisdom!
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Hey, I like this! You sum up living with integrity, wisdom and meaning in one paragraph (the poetic form leaves me a little baffled, but that's probably me). Thank you, GW, for sharing your wisdom!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
Comment from pattipac
Your prose about the dwindling art of compassion and accountability to those who impact your life in a positive way is a point that cannot be expressed enough.
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Your prose about the dwindling art of compassion and accountability to those who impact your life in a positive way is a point that cannot be expressed enough.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
Comment from chasennov
'"The Dying Art".' This is a particularly good piece of your Writing Poetry. I enjoyed the heart of it and thought your structure was also sound enough to incorporate a sharp refining of the formulation part of the poem. Well done.
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'"The Dying Art".' This is a particularly good piece of your Writing Poetry. I enjoyed the heart of it and thought your structure was also sound enough to incorporate a sharp refining of the formulation part of the poem. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
Comment from Lulube
Great and powerful words of wisdom you have shared/. I
especially like - trust is the basis of all real friendships. Hit the nail on the head with that one. And they can be far and few between.
well penned
lulube
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Great and powerful words of wisdom you have shared/. I
especially like - trust is the basis of all real friendships. Hit the nail on the head with that one. And they can be far and few between.
well penned
lulube
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
Comment from GWHARGIS
I liked the way you told of the complexities of life, but I disagree with one part. I think when we are born we don't feel alone. Maybe once we leave home we may feel alone, but the majority of us feel safe and secure when we are small. You have presented this in a very pleasing format. I like the characteristics of the those we wish to be surrounded by. Great piece.
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I liked the way you told of the complexities of life, but I disagree with one part. I think when we are born we don't feel alone. Maybe once we leave home we may feel alone, but the majority of us feel safe and secure when we are small. You have presented this in a very pleasing format. I like the characteristics of the those we wish to be surrounded by. Great piece.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
