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Have you danced?

His ways are not our ways.

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Comment from Janet Foor
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I loved this one Roy. The title is captivating. The vivid imagery is marvelous. I enjoyed reading line. I like the questions that draw the reader into the song. Well done.

Janet

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
    Thanks Janet, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, blessings, Roy.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is an excellent write, royowen, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful song about the way we have a one on one relationship with Christ and can find our joy in Him. I enjoyed reading it

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
    Thanks SW, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, blessings, Roy.
Comment from A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE
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Congratulations Roy! I feel you are empowering the bonds of love and Christ within the Mind of God, and all our human senses and physical reality can relate with - in Words that are God living, communicating through, expanding and ripening the Harvest of Christ and humanity as felt in the individual heart of our oneness. As a our conceptions link we literally expand with the awe and wonder of the Universal Mind of God and His work through our unique expressions into our communion in time.

And, for me the passages you quote have been major thought inspiring leads since the 1990's also. When I say, I see, it is God's Word that gifts detail and meaning from the void. Thank you so much. It is so good for me to link with someone willing to discuss the meanings of Words in the Bible and other Sacred Texts without religious dogma.

In Love and Delight and honour Of Christ in all that IS GOOD-GOD, Maureen*&*

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
    Thanks Maureen for this comprehensive and complimentary review and great and lovely words, it's loosely based on the conversation between God and Job at the end of the book of Job, blessings, Roy.
reply by A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE on 26-Sep-2015
    How many deep and reflective individuals enter conversation with Job and God, and the profound images of the Psalms! How blest we are to unfold new buds on this great Tree of Knowledge and life. Blessings, Maureen*&*
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
    Most definitely Thanks Maureen
Comment from Mai Mai
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This is an interesting piece. It's obviously a song, but it takes us outside of ourselves. I like the pondering you give us to do. Good job and good luck.

Mai Mai

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
    Thanks Mai Mai, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Sasha
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Marvelous work with this one. I love the images you have created int his. You have painted a beautiful picture with your first two verses, which are my favorite. Keep up the great work.


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
    Thanks Sasha, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, blessings, Roy.
Comment from ravenblack
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I really like your first two stanzas, to me speaking of the glories of imagination. We have all been on creative, spiritual fire at times in our lives where dancing on mountains of the moon and waltzing with flowers is metaphorically possible. But counting raindrops, grains of sand- the creative mind can only go so far. Those are tasks if a higher power. Good spiritual.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
    Thanks, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, blessings, Roy.
Comment from sibhus
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Wow, Roy, this is really good. I really enjoyed the images that you have created with these well placed words. They create such a beautiful picture of such a fantastic world. A world that we have yet to behold, hopefully. This is a beautiful poem, Roy.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
    Thanks, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, blessings, Roy.
Comment from petalangela
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This is so thought provoking in general not just spiritually.
As a dreamer I listen to or read words and pictures flow through my mind. It's lovely. I review poetry etc by the depth of my pictures

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
    Thanks Petal, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, blessings, Roy.
Comment from c_lucas
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R.Owen 12/5/1994 > Roy, this well written poem qualified for the "Treasure Chest Revived." You'll get an extra day of posting and FS would treat it as a new release. The only down side if if someone had place a review on the original. They can only update. Check in to it.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
    Thanks for great review, Charlie, The first time it's been posted my friend, I've written hundreds of songs, very few posted, the date was ten years before I was a poet, blessings, Roy.
reply by c_lucas on 25-Sep-2015
    You're welcome, Roy. Charloie
Comment from krys123
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Roy;
-Besides the well entertaining lyrics the writing itself is masterfully written. This imagery that was carouse and captured in knowledge beauty was exquisitely expressive and so vividly and demonstratively descriptive that it painted a tapestry of a picture in my mind. The personalization of each of your descriptions was very magically written to personalize one's feelings and emotions as one rode the waves and counted the drops in a cloud or the sands in the shore.
-Good use of enjambment
-As the lyrics go your writing has superb And a captivating hook Which to me is something that can be easily remembered and a song.
-An excellent and superb piece of writing and thank you so much for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
    Thanks Alex for your magical, thorough and most delightful review and most encouraging comments, you're one of my favourite reviewers and people, my friend, blessings, Roy.
reply by krys123 on 26-Sep-2015
    You are so very welcome my friend.
    Alex