Broken Promise
The realization of the Greatest Gift of All.62 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a story of a love - the greatest gift of all; once a little boy continues to play with Jesus Christ and others, none cares or concerns, at heartbreaks his Nanny loved him; I liked.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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This speaks a story of a love - the greatest gift of all; once a little boy continues to play with Jesus Christ and others, none cares or concerns, at heartbreaks his Nanny loved him; I liked.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for taking time to read my story. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from Dean Kuch
Wow. This is quite the tear-jerker you've managed to write here, Anonymous Author. I didn't notice a single error in spelling, grammar, or sentence structure when reading it.
The sad truth about this tearful tale is that there are a lot of kids in real-life just like poor Timmy. At the other end of the spectrum, there wouldn't be, nor would there have to be, if they had parents who actually cared.
Very well done.
I'll be watching for this in the voting booth.
~Dean
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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Wow. This is quite the tear-jerker you've managed to write here, Anonymous Author. I didn't notice a single error in spelling, grammar, or sentence structure when reading it.
The sad truth about this tearful tale is that there are a lot of kids in real-life just like poor Timmy. At the other end of the spectrum, there wouldn't be, nor would there have to be, if they had parents who actually cared.
Very well done.
I'll be watching for this in the voting booth.
~Dean
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much, Dean, for taking time to read my story. It tickles me to pieces that you didn't find grammar, spelling, or sentence structure problems. There was a time, not too long ago, when there would have been plenty in every sentence. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)