FAMILY TIES.
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Comment from BlueTiger
Great job; I like the creative banter in this piece. I like that your dialogue was realistic and witty at the same time. 'Howz 'bout I'm RE-tired?" That made me laugh. Good work, I look forward to reading more from you.
Sincerely,
-BT
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Great job; I like the creative banter in this piece. I like that your dialogue was realistic and witty at the same time. 'Howz 'bout I'm RE-tired?" That made me laugh. Good work, I look forward to reading more from you.
Sincerely,
-BT
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Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
