A Broken Heart Won't Kill Ya
[Meant to be sung, folks - not precise meter...]67 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
But a broken heart won't kill ya
Though it'll change your point of view.
Those lines were my favorite and they fit so well into the song. A great reminder, we will survive. Nice song
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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But a broken heart won't kill ya
Though it'll change your point of view.
Those lines were my favorite and they fit so well into the song. A great reminder, we will survive. Nice song
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much, Barb, for stopping by on this one -- always so good to hear from you over here! ;) Sorry I've been a bit AWOL lately - been packing up our house to get it ready to sell... but gonna spend some time here today! ;) Hope all's well in your corner of the universe - take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I would love to hear that to music, although I was already singing it to my own tune. That was lovely, Yvette, the words will resonate with many. But, as with many, there is always that better person on the other side of that door. I really enjoyed this, my friend. Well done! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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I would love to hear that to music, although I was already singing it to my own tune. That was lovely, Yvette, the words will resonate with many. But, as with many, there is always that better person on the other side of that door. I really enjoyed this, my friend. Well done! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much, Sandra, for stopping by on this one -- so good to hear from you over here! ;) Sorry I've been a bit AWOL lately - been packing up our house to get it ready to sell... but gonna spend some time here today! ;) Hope all's well in your corner of the universe - take care! ;) Yvette
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I know how much time it takes to prepare to move, it's not easy. It's lovely to see you here again. I do miss that smiley face in the corner of the page. xxx
Comment from pome lover
I think that's great and I give you a 6. I wish I could hear the music.
Your words sound natural and you realistically convey a heart broken.
I did think, also, that it was a bit long. I may be wrong, but do songs have that many different verses, usually? I thought it was two stanzas and a chorus. However, I think it is so neat that you have a tune in your head. I've written 4 country songs - but just the lyrics. No music in my head. Frustrating.
Anyway, good job. I bet it would make a great song.
pome lover
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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I think that's great and I give you a 6. I wish I could hear the music.
Your words sound natural and you realistically convey a heart broken.
I did think, also, that it was a bit long. I may be wrong, but do songs have that many different verses, usually? I thought it was two stanzas and a chorus. However, I think it is so neat that you have a tune in your head. I've written 4 country songs - but just the lyrics. No music in my head. Frustrating.
Anyway, good job. I bet it would make a great song.
pome lover
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for those beautiful stars, Lady Katharine -- songs are something I do rarely as they have to have a 'push' behind them... ;) :) Sorry I've been a bit AWOL lately - been packing up our house to get it ready to sell... but gonna spend some time here today! ;) Hope all's well in your corner of the universe - take care! ;) Yvette
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moving is always a tedious and stressful endeavor. Good luck with everything. :)
K
Comment from Puzzle
awe i love this one. i am a HUGE music and lyrics girl. i also love romance and heartbreak. this is written well. and it doesn't need explaining. great job!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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awe i love this one. i am a HUGE music and lyrics girl. i also love romance and heartbreak. this is written well. and it doesn't need explaining. great job!
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much, Puzzle, for stopping by on this one -- so good to hear from you over here! ;) Sorry I've been a bit AWOL lately - been packing up our house to get it ready to sell... but gonna spend some time here today! ;) Hope all's well in your corner of the universe - take care! ;) Yvette
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Hey Yvette!!!! No worries! Congrats on the move! We moved two years ago, so I know how hard that is!
Comment from Barbaraj1
I loved this poem-song. I sang it to my own music. An image came to me
of a cowboy singing this song. You are a lady of many talents. I always enjoy reading your works.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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I loved this poem-song. I sang it to my own music. An image came to me
of a cowboy singing this song. You are a lady of many talents. I always enjoy reading your works.
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much, Barbara, for stopping by on this one -- so good to hear from you over here! ;) Sorry I've been a bit AWOL lately - been packing up our house to get it ready to sell... but gonna spend some time here today! ;) Hope all's well in your corner of the universe - take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is precisely how it feels when you find yourself in that situation. Well done. The words are very fitting and soulful. I hope it's not autobiographical just something you think about now and then. :)Ralf
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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This is precisely how it feels when you find yourself in that situation. Well done. The words are very fitting and soulful. I hope it's not autobiographical just something you think about now and then. :)Ralf
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much, Ralf, for stopping by on this one -- so good to hear from you over here! ;) Sorry I've been a bit AWOL lately - been packing up our house to get it ready to sell... but gonna spend some time here today! ;) Hope all's well in your corner of the universe - take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Janetsue
Wish I had a six for this. My new favorite TV program is Songland. I think this would be very well-received there. The program is about songwriters presenting their original songs to different famous singers of all genre. Stay safe and well, Yvette!
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Wish I had a six for this. My new favorite TV program is Songland. I think this would be very well-received there. The program is about songwriters presenting their original songs to different famous singers of all genre. Stay safe and well, Yvette!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much, Janet, for stopping by on this one -- so good to hear from you over here! ;) Sorry I've been a bit AWOL lately - been packing up our house to get it ready to sell... but gonna spend some time here today! ;) Hope all's well in your corner of the universe - take care! ;) Yvette