This Easter Morn
Free Verse: Along a North Carolina woodland path97 total reviews
Comment from SnowBound
An interesting read of anger, forgiveness, and love. The author's note at the bottom was interesting. We've all had something like that happen and can relate. The dogwood is such a magnificent tree and deserves a poem.
SnowBound
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2007
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An interesting read of anger, forgiveness, and love. The author's note at the bottom was interesting. We've all had something like that happen and can relate. The dogwood is such a magnificent tree and deserves a poem.
SnowBound
Comment Written 09-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2007
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So pleased you enjoyed my offering. .. diane
Comment from Red Heart
A very touching and wonderful piece of writing.
He is all around us if we just open our eyes and heart and acknowledge his presence.
A very inspirational poem truly from the heart.
Red Heart
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2007
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A very touching and wonderful piece of writing.
He is all around us if we just open our eyes and heart and acknowledge his presence.
A very inspirational poem truly from the heart.
Red Heart
Comment Written 09-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2007
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Thank you so much for stopping by for a visit!! diane
Comment from G.B. Smith
Countless times I have spurned Him
and lost sight of Him along the way.
But He refuses to lose me.
Beside this unsuspecting
peaceful pathway,
enveloped by an
ethereal chapel of majestic
white flowering dogwood,
He bids me welcome,
and I accept.
I am no stranger to God,
nor is He to me,
on this splendid
Easter morn.<---------------I am grateful to Heavenly Father for that not giving up part, and recogonizing the potential we still have waiting for us to discover it
Bear
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2007
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Countless times I have spurned Him
and lost sight of Him along the way.
But He refuses to lose me.
Beside this unsuspecting
peaceful pathway,
enveloped by an
ethereal chapel of majestic
white flowering dogwood,
He bids me welcome,
and I accept.
I am no stranger to God,
nor is He to me,
on this splendid
Easter morn.<---------------I am grateful to Heavenly Father for that not giving up part, and recogonizing the potential we still have waiting for us to discover it
Bear
Comment Written 09-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2007
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Thank you so much for stopping by and your kind review!!!!! diane
Comment from Bryana
Lovely poem Mrs. KT. You have certainly captured in your poem the beauty of spring. I live in the Pacific Northwest where spring comes very early. We have different vegetation but just as beautiful.
I love your poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2007
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Lovely poem Mrs. KT. You have certainly captured in your poem the beauty of spring. I live in the Pacific Northwest where spring comes very early. We have different vegetation but just as beautiful.
I love your poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2007
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Thank you so much for your kind review and for stopping by for a visit!!!
diane
Comment from Oatmeal
Mrs. KT,
There are dogwoods all around where we live and they are the most beautiful trees that I have ever seen! My favorite in Texas was the Magnolias but the dogwoods are so much more beaustiful.
Thank you for sharing thi beautiful poem for Easter. The house was very quiet yesterday for there were no kids. My only child is 21 years old and she was at my mother's yesterday with her new boyfriend. I did get to tlk with her on the phone.
There was no SPAG. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
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Mrs. KT,
There are dogwoods all around where we live and they are the most beautiful trees that I have ever seen! My favorite in Texas was the Magnolias but the dogwoods are so much more beaustiful.
Thank you for sharing thi beautiful poem for Easter. The house was very quiet yesterday for there were no kids. My only child is 21 years old and she was at my mother's yesterday with her new boyfriend. I did get to tlk with her on the phone.
There was no SPAG. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 09-Apr-2007
Comment from Marillion
Very nice work, and a beautiful Easter poem. I'm in North Carolina, and I know the area you speak of very well. It's truly God's country, and you capture it well.
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Very nice work, and a beautiful Easter poem. I'm in North Carolina, and I know the area you speak of very well. It's truly God's country, and you capture it well.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2007
Comment from bud pine
Your feelings are my feelings You have expressed the thoughts of many others in your beautiful poem. Your words bring truth and joy in a well written and well thought out poem. Good job.
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Your feelings are my feelings You have expressed the thoughts of many others in your beautiful poem. Your words bring truth and joy in a well written and well thought out poem. Good job.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2007
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Absolutely Glorious!
I spent my summers in Michigan's Kewanaw Peninsula and just revisited when my mother said her final goodbyes in gasping breaths.
I too, am no stranger to God. Are any of us? No, I think not.
But I LOVE the way you've captured the nuance of familiarity to his spirit, his love and your love of nature and all that he created.
You seem to know him intimately and I find this a treasure and a rare find, indeed, in poetic prose.
Stunning imagery and evoked emotion!
THANK YOU!
GOD BLESS!
Jewell
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2007
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Absolutely Glorious!
I spent my summers in Michigan's Kewanaw Peninsula and just revisited when my mother said her final goodbyes in gasping breaths.
I too, am no stranger to God. Are any of us? No, I think not.
But I LOVE the way you've captured the nuance of familiarity to his spirit, his love and your love of nature and all that he created.
You seem to know him intimately and I find this a treasure and a rare find, indeed, in poetic prose.
Stunning imagery and evoked emotion!
THANK YOU!
GOD BLESS!
Jewell
Comment Written 09-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2007
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Hello Jewell! So deeply honored and humbled by your review. Thank you so much. And my sincerest apologies for being so late in my writing! Take Care. . .diane
Comment from greeneyes
What a beautiful Easter/spiritual poem
this poem flowed well and I loved the authors notes as well. Dogwoods are one of my favorite trees..and I cant imagine anyone purposefully cutting one down--how awful but how wonderful the ones you planted bloomed!
I dont have anything to recommend to make your poem better...
well done
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What a beautiful Easter/spiritual poem
this poem flowed well and I loved the authors notes as well. Dogwoods are one of my favorite trees..and I cant imagine anyone purposefully cutting one down--how awful but how wonderful the ones you planted bloomed!
I dont have anything to recommend to make your poem better...
well done
Comment Written 09-Apr-2007
Comment from Sharon McLeod
I really like this free verse poem. It has a
nice structure to it. It has a mce flow as well.
No errors noted. The picture is one of my
favorites and the background colors blend well.
I like the repetition which is well spaced.
It has great imagery throughout.
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I really like this free verse poem. It has a
nice structure to it. It has a mce flow as well.
No errors noted. The picture is one of my
favorites and the background colors blend well.
I like the repetition which is well spaced.
It has great imagery throughout.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2007